jourdan10169
Friday 27th July 2007 07:18 | Cor Leonis |
| are you going to coninue this one, orjust leave it, please tell me because if you leave it, i won't bother checking for updates, if you are going to finish i will check for updates, daily or weekly =] so far i have really liked it, please continue it, don't just leave it hanging. |
Delani
Sunday 18th September 2005 19:20 | Cor Leonis |
What? No, you can't leave it there! Oh how fabulous, I must say. This is quite a tantalizing little intrigue; well done!
Delani |
Videl
Sunday 18th September 2005 13:15 | Cor Leonis |
Now that is what I call a first chapter! I am intrigued! I hope you are planning on updating soon.
Am I right in guessing that Coe is Dumbledore, or am I way off the mark?
Good start! |
J.R. Lewis
Wednesday 14th September 2005 03:49 | Cor Leonis |
Nice start. Coe interests me. I don't suppose he will break the 'curse'
on the D.A. D. position. Don't suppose you'd tell us anyway.
I don't like the idea of the Dursley's being attacked. I know that they
'deserve' it, but no one really deserves it. Of course, your clever
writing leaves an opening to save them.
One last thing. You left out a "to" in the third paragraph from the bottom. I quote: "Harry managed control his shock,"
^
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Arnel
Tuesday 13th September 2005 22:24 | Cor Leonis |
| This is terrrific! I've read it twice so far and each time I picked up on more of the details. I found it delightfully funny that after their three-day stay at the Dursleys, the trio found it advisable to wait until after the Weasley/Delacour wedding to go hunting Horcruxes. You have a flair for the mysterious in the form of Mr Coe and I'm glad Harry was able to Portkey away from Privet Drive as the Death Eaters showed up. Just so you know, I'll be checking twice daily for the next chapter of your story. I definitely want more! Please post again soon. |
cckeimig
Tuesday 13th September 2005 21:32 | Cor Leonis |
aaah! I like the start, but I'm not a fan of doing-in the Dursley's on Harry's 17th birthday. As much as they deserve punishment...
Anyway, this promises to be an excellent story. I look forward to reading more!!! |
airboi21
Tuesday 13th September 2005 17:51 | Cor Leonis |
I like the story so far. |
arios
Tuesday 13th September 2005 16:45 | Cor Leonis |
| Arrrg! Don't leave it hanging like that! Great start! |
amamama
Tuesday 13th September 2005 10:47 | Cor Leonis |
Ooohhh, nice beginning! Quite captivatinig. I thought Harry
accepted Coe a bit too easily, but I understand where he's coming
from. A bit disturbing that McGonagall hasn't been in touch, and
nobody else from the Order either?
Now, where has the portkey taken him? Grimmauld Place,
maybe? Or someplace more intriguing perhaps... I look
forward to reading more, and (of course) I hope you update soon.
(Poor writers, the demanding readers you have to put up with).
Thnaks for sharing!
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hedwig_edwiges
Tuesday 13th September 2005 09:42 | Cor Leonis |
| Nice start! That should be interesting: a new DADA teacher and DE thinking the Dursleys are dead. I hope you update soon. |
