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Reviews For With a Tentative Touch by Delylah

gymnastgal19
Friday 29th August 2008 19:15
With a Tentative Touch
aww!!! nice story!
that would be a very sweet invention! its almost like texting lol
DebbieO
Sunday 6th April 2008 21:34
With a Tentative Touch
Great idea. I love the parchment.
keira azul
Saturday 15th July 2006 15:49
With a Tentative Touch
Very cute! If only you decided to continue with it, I think it's a great idea!
EmeraldPrincess
Tuesday 20th December 2005 18:02
With a Tentative Touch

Awww that was so SWEET

brad
Thursday 6th October 2005 15:12
With a Tentative Touch
Nice little story!  I've always liked those tales which have an epistolary component; it's a nice way to expose Harry's feelings and examine the way he regards his friends.

I guess every second reviewer by now has mentioned a couple of little errors?  In Remus's note he substitutes 'James' for 'Sirius', and a 'reducto' spell - I'm pretty sure - is a 'blow something to smithereens' enchantment, rather than a 'reduction' charm for diminishing size.

Cute bit of dialogue from Ginny; I particularly enjoyed the references to her previous 'singing' efforts.  'Ha!' indeed.  Grin on face.

Thanks for the story!
Cherry
Thursday 29th September 2005 09:36
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aww, how sweet. I hope you are making more.

 

cherry

weasleysrcool
Wednesday 28th September 2005 19:19
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That is just the sort of thing that Ginny would think of for Harry.  No-one in the wizarding world understands him like she does.  Wonderful little story.  I loved it. 
amamama
Wednesday 28th September 2005 10:48
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Neat idea, and the uses are limitless.  Both for good and bad....  Nice little fic.

Thanks!
Rocky235
Wednesday 28th September 2005 10:15
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That was a pleasent and mellow story.

The grammar was good plus I always enjoy the 'letters' in a story. (Although, they do remind me of all the crappy ones I've written.) 

ridgeback77
Wednesday 28th September 2005 07:14
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Very nice.  I've seen items similar to this in other fics, and I really like the idea of long distance instand communication.
kaiserzacc
Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:56
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mmm...good start...i love it when the twins come up with useful things

 

Melindaleo
Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:49
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Awwwwww, this was so nice.  I really enjoyed it - left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.  I love the connection to the diary, as well, only this time, Harry and Ginny get something nice out of it.  Nicely done.
cryslin
Tuesday 27th September 2005 20:14
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*Happy sigh*

That was a good idea!   Wizarding Instant Messaging.  Maybe the Twins will name this invention soon enough!  Now for the story, great as always.  I'm not too good a reviews, but this motivated me.  I would have thought that the writer's penmanship would show more, but that may be a computer code thing.  Anyway, great job!