angeli Sunday 15th June 2008 04:18 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
this story is just delicious!!!! please please write more soon!!!!!! |
Felix Felicis Thursday 26th October 2006 19:57 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
What a delightful story! I think it's so much fun when we get to see the crazy side of the teachers. That's especially so with Trelawney. I can just see them fighting like sisters after working together at Hogwarts for so long.
The plot idea here is terrific! I think everybody was disappointed when Umbridge didn't get fired. Having everyone contribute to her torture was great. It must have taken you a long time to come up with each person's "present".
Well done! |
tanaxanth Thursday 6th October 2005 22:33 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
Hahahaha
I love it!!!! |
XXXmister-E werepony unit Monday 3rd October 2005 14:55 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
hahahahha!that is the funniest fic i have ever read!i HATED umbrige,so boohyaaa!!!!!!!!evrey body party!
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Dawn Lionheart Wednesday 28th September 2005 04:12 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
Ha ha.....it's really good!! well, Umbridge DID desereve that! yeah, she did!! |
critmo Monday 26th September 2005 09:03 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
Very nice idea. I've always had a problem with Umbridge and that her torturing of students went virtually unnoticed. - Still, may I suggest that a little less slapstick (Trelawney + McG. esp.) would have made the story even better? |
Aaran St Vines Sunday 25th September 2005 08:28 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
What a choice bit of story telling. I really liked the sharing.
Well concieved, written, and staged. Good job! |
cckeimig Friday 23rd September 2005 22:30 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
Very, very sadistic, but lots of fun to read. |
dreamwitheyeswideopen. Thursday 22nd September 2005 20:49 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
haha. oh how she deserved that...a butterbeer congratulations!!! |
ridgeback77 Thursday 22nd September 2005 18:18 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
Oh that is too funny. I can hardly breath from laughing so hard.
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Lady Padfoot Thursday 22nd September 2005 15:02 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
I am queen of the first review! I just hope the font isn't huge, as my incredibly annoying compy tends to do that. But, back to the subject at hand.
It's awsome! Death to Toady! I knew you'd get accepted. *tacklehug* |
NCDSbookworm Thursday 22nd September 2005 14:54 | The Doom of Dolores Umbridge |
This is Superb! You did a great job. :) I hope to read more of your work!!!! |