lacyrachil
Monday 11th December 2006 13:50 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| I am assuming that this letter is her acceptance to Hogwarts? I hope so, that's a nice thought...that life will go on even after HP. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 7th June 2006 10:36 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| Very cute. I like the ending!!! |
| Wednesday 7th June 2006 11:45 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks! To be honest, witch!Rebekah was never intended until the very last moments of the initial writing process - I didn't even think about it, I just wrote it. My last line is possibly my second favourite out of everything I've ever written; the first favourite is the last line of another Rebekah chapter. Can you tell I love to write about her?
Thanks for the review,
Sarah |
guruvee
Friday 2nd June 2006 16:05 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| I enjoyed this story very much. It is refreshing, and full of hope for the future. |
| Saturday 3rd June 2006 02:22 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 1st June 2006 09:05 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| That was odd. In a good way. And why is Dumbledore contacting her. I don't get it. |
| Friday 2nd June 2006 06:07 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks, I guess. As long as it's in a good way!
The letter was from Hogwarts. She's 11 and it's the time of the summer when Muggle-borns receive their letters. Dumbledore, sadly, is dead and can't send her any letters.
Thanks for the review! |
Connor Landon
Wednesday 31st May 2006 20:25 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| I like it. |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 04:06 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
ohhhdear
Wednesday 31st May 2006 06:42 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| Thank you... very enjoyable! |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 04:05 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. You should see the rest of her story here eventually, but until then, the prologue and first chapter of Rebekah is on my writing journal. I do hope you enjoy it.
~Sarah |
Lina
Monday 29th May 2006 19:50 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
*shrinks* I didn't review before! I, a bonafide member of the Wacky Trio, didn\'t review!
*begs forgiveness*
Well, with the groveling being done and that being said, I loved this when I first read it, and I love it now.
You make everone wrapped up in this morning of Rebekah, and without making it too overt, it\'s easy to sense that she\'s a little out of the ordinary with her feelings of tranquility and peace, and then of course... there\'s a certain suspicious owl at the end...
I\'m trying to keep up with your chapters on your writing lj, and I think I reviewed on there, but if I didn\'t, I love Rebekah there too. I look forward to seeing where else she\'ll go.
*hugs*
-Lina |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 03:57 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
It's easy to forgive you,. Thanks for the review! You reviewed my first chapter of Rebekah at my journal, don't worry.
~Sarah xxx |
Wooster
Monday 29th May 2006 08:50 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| Whoa. That was a great story! Totally different from anything I've read before...what a cool idea! I loved the general feeling of peace and happiness that permeated the whole thing. Great! |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 04:01 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks for the lovely review! That's what I was going for. If you're still interested in my character, the prologue and first chapter of Rebekah can be found at my writing journal. Enjoy!
~Sarah |
Ari
Sunday 7th May 2006 03:18 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
*claps*
An excellent one shot. Can't wait for the next installment!
Ari |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 03:59 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks!
I actually posted the prologue and first chapter of Rebekah over on my writing journal on the exact day you reviewed. Hope you like!
~Sarah xxx |
Seaspray
Tuesday 31st January 2006 05:34 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
This actually made me want to cry, as soon as I'd figured out what had happened. It made me feel so *happy*. It could have been sappy but it wasn't somehow it was just... gorgeous. You took a really simple, but very beautiful idea and really made it real. I love how you use language:
She wandered on through the monuments, leaving a smile at the resting place of her great aunt in the form of a bundle of wildflowers at the base of the headstone Again, such beauty in a simple understated comparison. And the ending was lovely. It seems that girl *will* find out why everything was so bad, and then came right again. *sniffs* Lovely. |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 03:55 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I hope you liked/will like the prologue and first chapter of Rebekah, too! |
One4George_One4Fred
Monday 2nd January 2006 20:04 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Oh Sarah, what an awesome story. It was so beautiful. It's one of those stories that makes your jaw drop, and your eye get that watery feeling going on. I couldn't remember if I'd read this one or not, and I just got this account, so I thought I'd leave a little feedback. When you leave it to 'Carrie' at the end, was that me? Or am I just one of many 'Carries' you know?
Anyway, reguardless of if that's me or not, your a great writer. I know I say that often, but I really mean it. I try not to say things like that unless I mean it.
I hope to be reading more of your things soon.
Much Luv,
Carrie |
| Tuesday 3rd January 2006 05:51 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thank you so much, Carrie, for the review and for inspiring this story.
Of course its you. You're the only Carrie I know worth remembering.
I'm glad I was able to get a reaction from you. I hope you'll enjoy Rebekah's story as it continues.
Love,
Sarah
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PHsname
Sunday 27th November 2005 21:54 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
i got this story up until the very end...the part with the owl confused me...haha.
but otherwise, it was beautifully written. great job!!
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LittleAmyLou
Sunday 27th November 2005 15:38 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Hey Sarah,
I really loved this story, it was easy for me to understand what it was all about, it was beautifully written and I loved the emotion behind it. You knew that there was peace just by the surrounding atmosphere.
I also loved the ending...the Hogwarts Letter was an awesome touch! Simply gorgeous!
Love always,
Amy (a.k.a. LRW) |
| Thursday 1st June 2006 03:53 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you liked the prologue and first chapter of Rebekah. |
BasketKiwi
Wednesday 23rd November 2005 19:39 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Ooh! Interesting! I liked the Frank Bryce touch, I always felt bad that everyone thought him a murderer and he had that bad leg and then got all murdered by Voldie. And it's so sad that no one goes to his grave! It's nice that she will now! ^^
I know this story's in your Completed Stories section (I think...*scratches head*), but it sounds like there should be more chapters. I certainly hope so! n.n |
| Thursday 24th November 2005 14:37 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
This is a one-shot, but I think I will write more. It won't be part of this story, though; it'll be a separate.
Yes, I love my poor Frank Bryce. I had to have her over there.
Thanks for reviewing,
Sarah
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tante
Tuesday 22nd November 2005 23:13 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
I instantly thought this was a very clever piece. Good fresh feeling to it. I enjoy accompanying Rebekah on her morning walk and hearing the thoughts of her very good heart. She's just refreshing. It's nice to read a clever piece on a light (as in positive) topic after all the angst we often read.
The Hogwarts' letter was an excellent ending. Well done, Dancing! |
critmo
Sunday 20th November 2005 09:25 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| ::after reading the other reviews:: Oh, it's a Hogwarts letter - I didn't get it that she was such a young child. |
| Sunday 20th November 2005 10:19 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
| *laughs* Yeah, it's a Hogwarts letter. To be honest, it was supposed to
work even if she was just another Muggle. It was all about the peace
and the newness of everything around her. Voldemort was gone, the mist
was gone, strange things stopped happening... Everthing was right again.
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critmo
Sunday 20th November 2005 09:22 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| To be honest, I don't understand all that much. It's nicely written, it's clear that Voldemort is gone, but how does Rebekah fit into things? |
cckeimig
Friday 18th November 2005 20:32 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Nice, Sarah, although I've no clue what the Ready Brek means. :-)
I like the hope in it. |
| Saturday 19th November 2005 03:06 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Ready Brek is a sort of kids' porridge. Mix the white flakes with milk, heat, and you have yummy-ness.
Thanks for the review.
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Arnel
Thursday 17th November 2005 22:18 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| What a nice little story! You've alluded to the good Harry has done for the world quite well with your descriptions of the atmosphere and Rebekah's mood. I like how you had her promise Frank Brice that she'd tidy up his grave site and that there is hope in the next class of first years at Hogwarts which now includes your heroine. I hope there's more to this story. |
| Friday 18th November 2005 10:53 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks to VinFan, I think there will be. There's more to Rebekah than meets the eye.
Thanks. Nice reviews about Rebekah = first chapter even sooner. ;)
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Ladybug
Thursday 17th November 2005 18:48 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
| Great! That was her Hogwarts letter, right? What a wonderful idea for a story and you expressed it beautifully. I feel all happy and joyful now! |
| Friday 18th November 2005 10:51 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Yep, that was her letter. It was an idea I had after it was first
written, but I wanted to tie the story in with the new generation of
young witches and wizards who have never known the fear of Voldemort.
Thanks for reviewing.
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GovCampbell
Thursday 17th November 2005 18:09 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Hey Kiddo! This was great! I loved it, very well done.
*hugs* |
| Friday 18th November 2005 10:48 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
Thanks! *likes nice reviews*
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hewithnoname
Thursday 17th November 2005 16:07 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises |
Hi there Dm, Nicely written, well thought out, I liked this it was different. It shows courage to write about unknow charactors. You have done this well. I take it she is a Muggle? You made her beliveable. Well done. Now go and read my work and review,LOL.
All the best. |
| Friday 18th November 2005 10:47 | Much Love, Peace and Sunrises (Author Response) |
The owl, the hand-addressed envelope in green ink... Rebekah has no idea what's in store for her.
Thanks for the nice review.
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