majolie
Sunday 9th November 2008 18:56 | Green |
| aww - more sweetness |
lacyrachil
Friday 8th December 2006 13:13 | Green |
| You really are a great writer. I truly enjoy your short stories. |
critmo
Monday 19th December 2005 06:55 | Green |
| ::Sighs.:: |
tante
Friday 16th December 2005 12:58 | Green |
Lovely imagery again! I really enjoy these character studies. I wish my review were as eloquent as your fic. You're now on my update alert list. I'm excited to read more of your ideas. |
DailyProphetReporting
Friday 16th December 2005 02:04 | Green |
Lissa, it was wonderful to see your name on the posted list again. I
hope your time away was relaxing, but it's definitely great to have you
back here!
As for the story, I think it's very nicely done considering the
simplicity. The repetition provides a very nice avenue for portraying
Ginny's character and for some lovely imagery.
But it's your ability to pull this off in second person that really
impresses me. That's something most authors would even try (I certainly
wouldn't), yet you bring it off in such a way that it flows naturally
and makes the story feel just a touch more personal. From my
experience, that's a sign of real mastery of the craft.
Anyway, again, it's great to have you back!
-KC
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Melindaleo
Monday 12th December 2005 08:34 | Green |
Sniff. Aww, that was great. You know, after HBP and the infamous interview, I was feeling fairly certain that we wouldn't get to see much of Ginny for the first half of book 7. Now, after this talk with Stephen Fry that just aired, I'm not so certain anymore.
She said book 7 leaps right off of 6, and so much of 6 was a set up for 7. Well, much of 6 was Harry's developing feelings for Ginny, so I'm feeling more hopefull than I have so far. This just gave me a little boost in that direction.
Go get 'im, Ginny. |
graup_hagrid
Sunday 11th December 2005 22:02 | Green |
Here Here!
Nice little ditty.
Thank you for sharing.
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Ladybug
Sunday 11th December 2005 17:31 | Green |
| This is Good (with a captial 'G'). I don't know why, but the overwhelming sense I get from this is honesty - that she is being completely honest with herself in these roaming thoughts. |
Darker_Rage
Sunday 11th December 2005 16:43 | Green |
| An excellent piece of work. Daring is the first way I'd describe it;
the way you tell it, as if someone were speaking to Ginny, I've never
seen that before, and you've written it very well. I love the different
meanings of green you've worked in as well, real-world and metaphoric.
I say again, excellent work :)
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EJH0904
Sunday 11th December 2005 13:35 | Green |
| God, I so loved this! It's so powerful, yet so simple. I adore the fact that you evoke such moving images and emotions in just few short lines of print. Well done, indeed. |
EvieMarie
Sunday 11th December 2005 13:20 | Green |
| that was really wonderful, i love your style of writing! |
