majolie
Sunday 23rd November 2008 18:53 | Feeling One's Age |
| Wow - I loved this. Fabulous little story. The twins were great - so funny, but real. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 16th January 2008 21:13 | Feeling One's Age |
nice story. I kinda figured that would be why ginny was so upset... i loved this story though
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pyromain
Saturday 15th September 2007 07:20 | Feeling One's Age |
loved it, Ginny was just the way i like her.
Thanks for writing this story. |
MudbloodMatt
Monday 13th February 2006 12:35 | Feeling One's Age |
As I'd expect, some excellent work, it's always a pleasure to read anything you've written.
Ginny was seeming fairly devious until I reached the end, enjoyed it. Anyway, I hope you are well.
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DaFalcon
Saturday 7th January 2006 12:34 | Feeling One's Age |
| As usual, another very great one shot. I loved it. |
anniep
Saturday 7th January 2006 08:54 | Feeling One's Age |
| Wonderful view of a good marriage! Thanks for your story. |
bbnaz
Friday 6th January 2006 10:45 | Feeling One's Age |
| Lovely premise and I howled at the last line. I hope that I never ever start to act and feel my age.............. |
aschowin
Friday 6th January 2006 00:24 | Feeling One's Age |
| This is a really fun story. I like that you haven't overdone every single detail of their futures, you gave just what was needed for the story. And it is a very good look into married life. Great job. |
jeanne
Thursday 5th January 2006 15:34 | Feeling One's Age |
| See,as Spark solition said.One could picture it all,it was so clear. |
jeanne
Thursday 5th January 2006 15:31 | Feeling One's Age |
| This was one of the most enjoyable pieces ever.They sounded so much like regular folks,and the kids were so cute.I truly liked it.A very comfortable piece to read.I can,t explain what was different about this,but it certainly was,and in a great way.very well done.Kudos to you. |
| Thursday 5th January 2006 17:04 | Feeling One's Age (Author Response) |
| Thank you, very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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ginnybaby1017
Thursday 5th January 2006 13:07 | Feeling One's Age |
| Wonderful...absolutly smashing! So cute with the twins...I would love to see more. |
| Thursday 5th January 2006 17:04 | Feeling One's Age (Author Response) |
| Thank you. ;)
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Spark Soliton
Thursday 5th January 2006 12:48 | Feeling One's Age |
YES!!! How wonderful to see yet another of your lovely, brilliant stories here on PS!!! It's always a treat to be able to read your stories and many a happy moment has been spent reading your writing!
This is such a rare find today - a gentle, caring and heart-warming humouristic tale without schadenfreude or slap-stick and so incredibly well written as well!!! As amazing as it sounds your writing does go from high to higher, phrases and words are so well chosen and you paint a picture with these words in such a way that I feel I can see everything as clear as if I was there and yet not a superflous word!
Very, very happy to yet again have been given the grace to read another of your stories - thank you so much, Velvethope, for writing and sharing this. Suddenly this new year seems to be off to a brilliant start! |
| Thursday 5th January 2006 17:03 | Feeling One's Age (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed the 2nd time, Spark. ;) Thank you.
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