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Reviews For The Invasion by Delfino

bbrown32
Monday 19th March 2007 17:01
The Invasion
This is an awesome story and would really like to read the ending of it. Is there any word on when it will be finished and posted.
Tuesday 20th March 2007 18:34The Invasion (Author Response)
Oh, I feel really horrible. The chapters are almost done, I promise. They will be corrected by this weekend and hopefully posted soon. I truly am sorry! My life has been so crazy and I hardly have any time at all for myself anymore, let alone sitting down and sifting through 40 pages!

I do hope that my lack of organization has not affected your view of the story and that you continue reading!
bbrown32
Saturday 13th January 2007 20:34
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Please hurry and post more on this story. I have been waiting to see if they make it out of Hogwarts and if Harry and Ginny reunite.
Sunday 14th January 2007 07:20The Invasion (Author Response)
I have quite a few more chapters already written and my beta is finishing up with them as we speak. My beta had a few technical difficulties and could not get internet at her home, so we had to wait quite a while until she could correct the chapters I've sent to her. I truly am sorry that you've had to wait so long and hope that this will not have any impression on the story itself Please keep reading! The chapters should be up soon!
bbrown32
Saturday 21st October 2006 16:13
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I really am looking forward to the rest of your story. I love stories that catch my attention right away and you did. Keep up the great work.
Sunday 14th January 2007 07:21The Invasion (Author Response)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. New chapters soon to come!
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 21:28
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Wow. Action already. This is good so far.
Wednesday 28th June 2006 09:38The Invasion (Author Response)
Thanks. More action soon to come!
Evelyn
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 12:05
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Very interesting...

Now, I admit I find it rather hard to believe that they've been imprisoned for two years now and no one has done something about it. OK, they can't really do anything because their are always being watched, but what about the outside world? That is, is it really 2 years since there seem to be some 2nd years present?

But apart these little nit-picks... I do enjoy this!
You've captured the desperate situation very well. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 14:18The Invasion (Author Response)
Yes, two years does seems a bit long, I admit, but it's all explained later on, I promise! There's a good explanation for it all. I won't ruin it now, however. You'll just have to wait.

Thanks so much for the review!
Connor Landon
Tuesday 2nd May 2006 15:55
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OH my gosh, oh my gosh! Suspense!
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 05:29The Invasion (Author Response)
SillyGillie
Saturday 21st January 2006 20:45
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What a brilliant story. The suspense is killing me! That was such an awesome opening chapter. I love how Mr. Weasley is the minister of magic. Aw I hope Ginny goes and gets help quickly! I love how Luna can still be her wacky self even when she's running from danger. LoL. Like a cat, reminds me of an interview with Orlando Bloom. Really brilliant job!
Sunday 22nd January 2006 07:26The Invasion (Author Response)
Thanks! I was hoping that the first chapter would catch someone's interest! I hope I captured Luna well--she'll be appearing in later chapters.