casper81480
Monday 14th September 2009 07:05 | Cursed |
| i thought this was a great story but i read all of it, noticed it wasnt finished and wondered had you finished it and not posted say that it was a long time since updating please let me know |
railabuser
Sunday 8th June 2008 09:24 | Cursed |
| Great read! Thanks alot for this story. |
Memory King
Tuesday 11th December 2007 19:40 | Cursed |
| Pretty good start, very well written and interesting. Looking forward to reading more! |
Bagelz
Wednesday 8th August 2007 17:22 | Cursed |
| Popped onto the Top 10 list for the first time and realized I'd read and enjoyed most of them. I didn't think there'd be another story I'd be interested after DH, but your Prologue just hooked me! It looks like the story was unfinished based on the chapters and hasn't been updated since 2006, but if you are still checking your reviews I didn't think it would hurt to let you know you still have some new readers. Looking forward to the story, hope it has an ending! |
shaheen
Wednesday 13th June 2007 04:13 | Cursed |
Hi
Absolutely brilliant read,,
Love the way this story is set out, and where it goes.
Cant wait to read the last few chapters,, Hope you publish them soon.
Shaheen |
Patches
Saturday 31st March 2007 14:06 | Cursed |
| A devastating end. But Harry is still alive and so are Ron, Hermione, Ginny and Neville. They just don't know it yet. I can see the devastated area in my mind from your description. Thank you for writing. I look forward to more of this story. p |
Chreechree
Tuesday 27th February 2007 02:15 | Cursed |
| My friend cwarbeck has been after me for months (since... oh, July or August) to read this. It was never for lack of interest, but finding the time to settle to a new LONG WIP. I will likely pop in for some more reviews as I go, but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed the start. I'm wondering, of course, who just took Harry and where was he sent? I really appreciated how you ended the chapter, about how that the Prime Minister wouldn't even bother to think about the cost to bring about Voldemort's end. There's always a cost... Great start. |
huskers
Thursday 22nd February 2007 13:21 | Cursed |
Ok, I've read some of your stuff before, and this is actually my second time through this one. I'm going to review for you this time through. I have to say, overall that I like it much more than your other longer stories. I really didn't like the whole imortal deal for Harry. That didn't change that the writing itself was good. And, were talking about this story now, and I really like the premis and what I have read so far. You really went a direction that I have never seen or had anyone even come close to in an after Voldemort story, and I like that. My first read of this chapter had me thinking the scene where someone finds Harry, is someone from the ministry finding him alive after destroying Voldemort, modifying his memory, and then sending him to where he would be found by the Tiparnay. After the second read, I'm thinking it is actually past that point in time, and Harry is already in the Tiparnay forest and it is Thane finding him who sends him to the Tiparnay healers with that blue gemstone.
Am I correct?
Anyways, I like the set up you do with this, and your changing from scene to scene. None are to long, and all seem to give just enough information to lead you along, but also create a new question. Great job. |
eaglesnest
Saturday 17th February 2007 15:54 | Cursed |
I'm starting so late, there's so much to read to catch up ...... but I'm basically here because hwimsey loves this story ...... and that's good enough for me. I'm surprised that I overlooked this before, but timing is everything as they say.
Now, just who did rescue Harry? And from where? |
libbypotter
Monday 5th February 2007 05:17 | Cursed |
| OK I'm rereading this story for about the 4th time as it is very worth another read. Also I've realised you are very like JKR and plan very well because there are so many little mentions that suddenly turn out to be crucial 10 or so chapters further on. My mission is to try and spot them this time. |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:41 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Libby,
I love to put in those little things that become very important later on I hope you spot them all. (It's a little like "Where's Wally!")
All the best,
Myth xxx |
PhoenixFire
Thursday 4th January 2007 21:37 | Cursed |
Wow! What a wonderful start! Very mysterious and although not everything is clear, it's very definite that it is after the war...
Poor Harry! Looks like he got damaged really bad. I wonder who helped him? ... Well, I'll probably find out sooner or later in the story! A very nice and dramatic beginning - can't wait to read more!
PhoenixFire |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:41 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Phoenixfire,
It's great to know that you're enjoying, and I hope the dramatic beginning keeps you asking questions as the story continues
All the best,
Myth xxx |
kato
Monday 25th December 2006 02:16 | Cursed |
Hallo,
I m new at reading this fic and I really love it.
Harry and Voldemort, who merge. Great idea, alltough I do hope JK isn t going to do that in her seventh and last book, otherwise she is going to get an awfull lot of threatening mails.
I read this all in one and now I m hooked.
Kato |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:39 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Kato,
Great to hear you're hooked. I hope you continue to enjoy it
Myth xxx |
Senyah Mastery
Monday 18th December 2006 03:53 | Cursed |
You wouldnt happen to be competing with someone to keep JK's series goingon after she's done are you? If not, thats to bad, I would vote for ya. So far the writing is great and I wouldnt be surprised if you wrote books for a living Well thanks for a great read!!
Lyrad Senyah |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:37 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Senyah,
Aw, thank you. I hope to write books for a living one day
Myth xxx |
Elvenlaughter
Sunday 17th December 2006 14:33 | Cursed |
| I love this story, it's engaging and unique! Please continue it. Thanks for posting an interesting novella that doesn't get boring!!! |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:37 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Elvenlaughter,
Your wish is my command. I fully plan to see this story through to completion. However long it takes
Myth xxx |
Evenstar21
Sunday 10th December 2006 15:53 | Cursed |
Well, I enjoyed your story so much that I read it in one sitting and now I've signed up so I can review it chapter by chapter. Rare for me since I prefer to lurk. I'm glad this is an AU story since I prefer those and post HBP stories. I do have a question though.
Does this story follow cannon including Half Blood Prince?
I like the beginning here. Very intriguing. It seems very angsty yet I kept reading anway. Though only thing I would mention is to please include more details. I love richly detailed stories. Well, keep writing when life permits and I'll keep posting reviews. |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:38 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Evenstar,
Thank you. I do love being left reviews, and it's great to know I've brought you out of lurkdom.
It does follow half-blood prince canon, but very loosely. I don't want to step on JK's toes,s o I've tried to be as ambiguous about the last events as possible.
I hope you keep enjoying it!
Myth xx |
lacyrachil
Thursday 16th November 2006 11:41 | Cursed |
| Beautifully written. Heart tugging. Great. |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:35 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Thank you LacyRachil It's fantastic that you're enjoying the start so much
Myth xxx |
libbypotter
Tuesday 3rd October 2006 07:11 | Cursed |
While waiting for your very prompt updates, I have started to reread this story. I very rarely reread fanfics but this is my favourite story and I want to savor it again
My first impressions on this chapter were what an interesting beginning, what hit Harry and who rescued him? I'm off to indulge myself rereading the rest |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:35 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Triple review! Don't you just love it when hte system goes wonky and you keep hitting the submit button, only to get duplicates
Cheers libby
Myth xxx |
libbypotter
Tuesday 3rd October 2006 07:11 | Cursed |
While waiting for your very prompt updates, I have started to reread this story. I very rarely reread fanfics but this is my favourite story and I want to savor it again
My first impressions on this chapter were what an interesting beginning, what hit Harry and who rescued him? I'm off to indulge myself rereading the rest |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:34 | Cursed (Author Response) |
| Double review Thank you, Libby |
libbypotter
Tuesday 3rd October 2006 07:11 | Cursed |
While waiting for your very prompt updates, I have started to reread this story. I very rarely reread fanfics but this is my favourite story and I want to savor it again
My first impressions on this chapter were what an interesting beginning, what hit Harry and who rescued him? I'm off to indulge myself rereading the rest |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:34 | Cursed (Author Response) |
HI Libby,
I hope you enjoy the re-read, and get to savour it with all its faults I'm glad that the prologue provided a good hook to get you going.
Myth xxx |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 10th September 2006 21:46 | Cursed |
| Aww. Who is that man who took Harry? Or was is a woman? It sounded like a man though. Very good. And, at some points, sad. |
| Friday 16th February 2007 05:32 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi daniel,
Thank you, I'm really happy that you enjoyed hte beginning, and hopefully your questions will be answered
Myth xxx |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 14:46 | Cursed |
Wow, nice start. So what happened to Harry ? Obviously he's not dead (though apparently dying). And who is the person (being?) who sent him away with the blue gemstone?
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| Thursday 17th August 2006 09:25 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Gryffindro Dragon,
Your questions will be answered, I promise. Glad you liked hte beginning. And thank you for your reviews on the other stories. I'm sorry I didn't have time to reply to those as well.
Myth xx |
LadiJen
Wednesday 7th June 2006 19:51 | Cursed |
| Hey! I cant wait for the update. I love this story because its not like all the other post-Hogwarts fan-fics. Keep up the great work! |
| Thursday 8th June 2006 06:29 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi LadiJen,
Thank you. I wanted to try something a bit out of the oridinary way. it's great to hear I've suceeded. There should be a new chapter up on Friday!
Myth xx |
Spiderwort
Wednesday 7th June 2006 12:15 | Cursed |
| Well, this sent chills up my spine for sure. The description of London--I could almost feel myself in the big city. And Harry slowly bleeding to death. Hmm, Asli--I may have trouble sleeping tonight. Will send you a bill for the Ambien, Luv. ; ) |
| Thursday 8th June 2006 06:28 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Spiderwort!
Thanks for taking the time to take a glance at the story. *Provides cash for the Ambien* It's that kind of story I'm afraid. It's certainly causing me some sleepless nights!
Myth xx
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DailyProphetReporting
Wednesday 24th May 2006 01:31 | Cursed |
Hey Myth,
Remember me from the good 'ole Post-OotP days? Well, I'd pretty much given up on reading or writing fanfic since HBP, but I've just finished a complete re-read of the series and it's left me excited and anxious for more. And this -- a story from one of my favorite fanfic authors set post-Hogwarts so as not to be treading too much on what Jo's set out for Book 7 -- seems to be just what I was seeking for a reemersion into fics.
I like what I see so far. It's got the hints of mystery and the heaps of angst I've come to expect from your stories. That can only be a good sign based on what I've seen in the past. And good job tying it to HBP with the Prime Minister reference.
Anyway, I doubt I'll be as prompt about reading and reviewing as I was in the old days as I'm easing my way back into things, but I'll do my best. I'm sure it'll be a fun ride.
-KC
PS -- Lest I forget to say so elsewhere, thanks for all your efforts on this and your past stories. In all these months that I've known I should be working on my story but lacked the motivation to do it, I've developed a new appreciation for the amount of work and commitment that goes into completing a good story. And nobody deserves credit for that more than you. So, again, thank you! |
| Thursday 25th May 2006 07:06 | Cursed (Author Response) |
KC,
It's so wonderful to hear from you again. I've always respected and admired you and your work, and it's wonderful to know that you're taking the time to read my humble imaginings
I toyed with writing a 7th book equivalent but having done it twice before (the first of which will hopefully be forever lost in the mists of the internet) I thought post-Hogwarts was hte wayt tog o. Marlow had been loitering around in my mind for a while, and this story is hte result.
Please read at a liesurly pace. This story is, first and foremost, for the enjoyymnet of whoever reads it. Reviews are my prozac, but they're not required. The next chaptere will be out on schedule if I have 100 comments or none
Thank you for your "thank you" Writing long stories is a lot of effort, but I cannot, for the life of me, write shorts. I end up extrapolating and before i know it a whole new novel's come out of it. One day I'll turn my hand to original, but the paddling pool of fanfictio is just far too much fun at the moment.
Myth xx |
cckeimig
Friday 14th April 2006 21:45 | Cursed |
| Brilliant and shocking start. I'm off to read more! |
| Thursday 4th May 2006 13:55 | Cursed (Author Response) |
HI cckeimig,
Thank you!
I hope you continue to enjoy the story
Myth xx |
parakletos
Friday 24th March 2006 13:40 | Cursed |
Urgh, sorry, that reply sounded really bad-tempered, and it wasn't Thanks for pointing out the practicalities, honestly it's great for me, because my London geography isn't up to scratch most of the time. I think I'll leave the planes in though, and claim artistic license. I know for certain they can be heard all hours of the day and most of the night over western suburbs.
Accepted
I don't hear the planes where I am in SE London so its perhaps a bit pompus for me to insist that its the same all over the capital. Enjoying the story still. |
| Friday 24th March 2006 17:07 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Glad to hear the apology was accepted. I'm hardly one to know where planes can be heard all over London either, and I realised how annoyed I sounded
Glad your still enjoying the story.
Myth xx |
parakletos
Friday 10th March 2006 16:02 | Cursed |
Just a couple of pracrtical observations; Oxford Circus doesn't have flashing neon but Piccadilly Circys does And you can't hear the planes heading to Heathrow in central London, they are way too high.
A proper review follows chapter five. |
| Friday 24th March 2006 13:03 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Urgh, sorry, that reply sounded really bad-tempered, and it wasn't Thanks for pointing out the practicalities, honestly it's great for me, because my London geography isn't up to scratch most of the time. I think I'll leave the planes in though, and claim artistic license. I know for certain they can be heard all hours of the day and most of the night over western suburbs.
Thanks again and my apologies for sounding a bit bad tempered.
Myth xx |
SillyGillie
Saturday 11th February 2006 13:40 | Cursed |
I tried to review this story on Thursday but Pheonixsong.net stopped working! So I will review it now.
I loved it. It was soo interesting. I loved how you began the story in the Muggles POV. How the police ran into the streets still adjusting their clothes. Brilliant. What vivid imagery. Seeing the defeat of Voldemort from the muggles point of view, outstanding.
Poor Harry! I hope that was someone who was good who's going to heal him. Poor Ginny, Hermione and Ron. All trying to find Harry. Ron only sees his crushed glasses. So sad. Ginny burning herself trying to get closer to Harry. I'm really glad that the glasses were in one piece, at least it gives them some hope.
That was interesting, how Ron could, in essence, see the battle because he could see Harry's prints in the mud. Poor Ron! I hope Harry comes back in good shape really soon. I can't imagine the pain he must of gone through. The blood staining the floor. Poor Harry!!
I really enjoyed how you brought this chapter together, by ending with the minister's point of view, utter brilliance. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Amazing job! |
| Friday 24th February 2006 07:15 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi SIllie Gillie,
Sorry it's taken me so long to reply. The 'Song somehow hid your review from me
Thank you for your praise. I wanted to start of with a dislocated POV and thought the Muggle one fit perfectly.
"Poor harry" will continue to be a mystery, but it'll be a good one. I can guarantee that this story will end Happily. After all that's something I beleive in!
Thank you for reviewing, and Chapter 3 should be up soon.
Myth xx |
Adagio
Thursday 9th February 2006 13:49 | Cursed |
| Wow. Now that is a dramatic start. Looking forward to updates. Nice writing style. Your use of imagery to make us feel as though we're there beside the different characters. |
Adagio
Thursday 9th February 2006 13:47 | Cursed |
| Wow. Now that is a dramatic start. Looking forward to updates. Nice writing style. Your use of imagery to make us feel as though we're there beside the different characters. |
| Friday 10th February 2006 04:34 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Adagio,
Thank you, and since you posted a double review you get double the thanks Updates should be a weekly thing, barring real life getting hairy. I'll keep everyone updated of my progress.
I'm glad you like my writing style. I've been writing for a very long time, and the way its evolved is a small source of pride for me. It's wonderful to hear that other people enjoy it too
Thank you for reviewing!
Myth xx |
Melindaleo
Thursday 9th February 2006 08:57 | Cursed |
Squee! You\'re back! You\'re back! Hooray! (Okay, the lame review filter got me because I used way too many e's on on my squee, lol - so know they are there)
What an intense beginning! I loved it. All the angst and good dramatic tension that I\'ve come to expect from you. But where\'s Harry? I\'m terrified you\'ll make it years before he returns, but I\'m going to hold my breath and wait to see what you do.
Loved the line about not thinking he\'d die alone in the end. Sniff. Sniff. Oh, welcom back. You\'ve been missed. |
| Friday 10th February 2006 04:32 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Lol! Yes I am back. i sent you an email via the 'Song system, but I wasn't sure if you would get it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to hit people between the eyes with this story, at least to start off with. The very first words of Chapter one are "Six years later" and in some ways you'll have to wait a while to find out what became of Harry
I wrote that line with you in mind. You have always been one of my most diligent friends, and I know that you care greatly for Harry's well being. He's in good hands
You've been missed too, and it's great to be back
Myth xx |
reading-rider
Wednesday 8th February 2006 23:55 | Cursed |
| I'm SOOOO glad to see you back again! What a GREAT chapter! I'm looking forward to your story. |
| Thursday 9th February 2006 02:00 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Reading-rider,
It's great to be back! I look forward to hearing your comments on Chapter 1.
Myth xx |
VirginiaGinny
Wednesday 8th February 2006 16:11 | Cursed |
Oh my.
This was a sad one.
I totaly felt Hermionies emotion, and thought that the glasses remaning unbroken totaly rocked. |
| Thursday 9th February 2006 02:00 | Cursed (Author Response) |
VirginiaWeasley,
It is meant to provoke an emotional response, and I'm glad you empathised with Hermione's character. The whole story, overall, won't be sad. It's more of an action/adventure.
Myth xx |
aschowin
Wednesday 8th February 2006 14:14 | Cursed |
| Very powerful start. The emotion from Ron and Hermione was especially touching. I look forward to your next chapter. |
| Thursday 9th February 2006 01:57 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Aschowin,
I'm glad the emotion came across well. I was a bit frightened of making them melodramatic, but it's a relief to know that I got it right.
The next chapter should be up on Friday.
Myth xx |
Evelyn
Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:44 | Cursed |
Very interesting...
I understand that Voldemort died because Harry destroyed the last Horcrux - so the last part of Vs soul inside his body was not enough to susvive? I would have thought differently, but never mind! It's been a great beginning, and very emotional.
I loved the different perspectives, beginning and ending with the muggle world.
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| Thursday 9th February 2006 01:56 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Evelyn,
The story runs on hte premise that any bit of soul transferred to Harry at any point in time is not enough to maintain Voldemort's existence Although it's something that will be expanded on as the story progresses. I promise!
Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you enjoy it, and I hope it continues as an enjoyable tale!
Myth xx |
Stephanie
Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:38 | Cursed |
| Hi! I'm very excited that you will treat us to another story! This prologue definitely got my attention. It's got mystery, tragedy, anxiety... I'm looking forward to the first chapter! |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:44 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hi Stephanie,
Do you know I'm just as excited to be writing again! It;s more a case of readers such as you treating me by being such a wonderful audience. I hope the story continues ot be enjoyable for you, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts on future chapters!
Myth xx |
Antonia East
Wednesday 8th February 2006 09:08 | Cursed |
I'm going to try a new way of reviewing, and make comments as I go read. So, first things first, the author's notes. I think they are wonderful author's notes and that all author's notes ever should say nice things about me (hugs). Although, as I remember, you described Marlow and I said 'he sounds hot, you should definitely write him!' So obviousy I played a pivotal role.
I am disappointed not to find the word 'ochre' in the first paragraph. *Ducks* You do the most amazing descriptions, actually. Four lines and the mood is set and we're there.
The sense of chaos is vividly portrayed with the onset of the blinding flare.
The Harry bit after the battle is beautiful in its ghastliness. This line He had feared that he would die when the battle came, but he had not thought he would be so alone. really got me. That's a terrific insight - Harry's aloneness as at the Dursleys or in the graveyard as opposed to the solidarity Ron and Hermione give him.
Hermione's thought that she should have known more - been better prepared is utterly Hermione. I love the detail of Ginny trying to get to Harry. You've again set the scene amazingly well - the desolation and numbness is intense.
Ron taking charge is great - he does do better in a crisis than Hermione. And his finding Harry's glasses is a heart-breaking detail. So many people had died last night, and yet Harry’s glasses were unbroken. How was it fair that so many lives could be destroyed, but something as fragile as that could be spared? That's awesome writing. That's completely right - I bet that's exactly how someone'd react.
I love the line about offering sympathy in his own neat script - showing how utterly inadequate anything anyone can do or say is, especially from one who doesn't care. It's a nice touch to have the very formal and impersonal bit about the Muggle Prime Minister after the palpable emotion of the earlier segments. It really throws into contrast the worlds and the devestation which the war has caused in some places but not others.
Great start, Asli. I shall look forward to the brooding chain-smoker coming on the scene. |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:34 | Cursed (Author Response) |
You double reviewer you
Double the hugs!
Myth xx |
Antonia East
Wednesday 8th February 2006 09:08 | Cursed |
I'm going to try a new way of reviewing, and make comments as I go read. So, first things first, the author's notes. I think they are wonderful author's notes and that all author's notes ever should say nice things about me (hugs). Although, as I remember, you described Marlow and I said 'he sounds hot, you should definitely write him!' So obviousy I played a pivotal role.
I am disappointed not to find the word 'ochre' in the first paragraph. *Ducks* You do the most amazing descriptions, actually. Four lines and the mood is set and we're there.
The sense of chaos is vividly portrayed with the onset of the blinding flare.
The Harry bit after the battle is beautiful in its ghastliness. This line He had feared that he would die when the battle came, but he had not thought he would be so alone. really got me. That's a terrific insight - Harry's aloneness as at the Dursleys or in the graveyard as opposed to the solidarity Ron and Hermione give him.
Hermione's thought that she should have known more - been better prepared is utterly Hermione. I love the detail of Ginny trying to get to Harry. You've again set the scene amazingly well - the desolation and numbness is intense.
Ron taking charge is great - he does do better in a crisis than Hermione. And his finding Harry's glasses is a heart-breaking detail. So many people had died last night, and yet Harry’s glasses were unbroken. How was it fair that so many lives could be destroyed, but something as fragile as that could be spared? That's awesome writing. That's completely right - I bet that's exactly how someone'd react.
I love the line about offering sympathy in his own neat script - showing how utterly inadequate anything anyone can do or say is, especially from one who doesn't care. It's a nice touch to have the very formal and impersonal bit about the Muggle Prime Minister after the palpable emotion of the earlier segments. It really throws into contrast the worlds and the devestation which the war has caused in some places but not others.
Great start, Asli. I shall look forward to the brooding chain-smoker coming on the scene. |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:33 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Antonia, you rock. You know that, right?
You deserve that place in the author's notes. Your role of getting this story onto paper was definitely pivotal. (Marlow says thanks for the compliment btw He's looking forward to his entrance in chapter one.)
The word ochre is banned from the first four chapters of this story. However, I am sure it'll put in an appearance very soon.
Each chapter has a theme, and you're right. This one was chaos. I wanted to portray victory and hopelessness throughout. That juxtaposition appealed to me a bit too much I think
The characterisations terrified me. I wanted them true to canon, but a bit unique. I'm glad they came across all right!
I love it when people tell me their favourite lines, and you've told me loads. As I said before, you rock!
*Passes the ash tray to her brooding, chain-smoking character* He's looking forward to seeing you too
Hugs,
Myth xx
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rose
Wednesday 8th February 2006 08:49 | Cursed |
| I like this story so far. I hope you keep up the good work so that I can see where this story is going. Update soon please! |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 10:29 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hello Rose,
Thank you. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. I'm hoping to post a chapter a week, and I hope that the story is something that everyone enjoys
Myth xx |
Shoia24
Wednesday 8th February 2006 07:57 | Cursed |
Oh, this is a post-war fanfic for the cannon? I was expecting a continuation of Reunion. This is going to be more interesting than I thought...
Excellent beginning. There was information for us to get a peek at what's happening with everyone, and just enough to make it a cliffhanger.
Well, I hope to see more of this story soon, and keep up the great work!
~Shoia |
| Wednesday 8th February 2006 07:59 | Cursed (Author Response) |
Hello Shoia,
After much battling with words a sequel to Reunon refused to work. I decided the story was best left as it was. This is a brand new story which I hope will be just as enjoyable.
Chapter One should be up on Friday, just to get everyone going Thank you for my first review. It's wonderful that you enjoyed it!
Myth xx |
