Dad
Wednesday 1st April 2009 10:35 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| I have just started your third story of the night. For those of us with the emotional range of a bent teaspoon, the first chapter was mind blowingly original. |
majolie
Saturday 1st November 2008 18:29 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| This is excellent. |
sagh
Friday 1st September 2006 09:57 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
Your writing style is absolutely beautiful. Lines like this,
Love, real love, was what we all sometimes felt for each other, and the very fact that it remained largely intangible made it a very complicated business indeed.
give me goosebumps. I'm so glad I found this!
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Evelyn
Tuesday 2nd May 2006 11:12 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
This is so ... different. And so very, very good.
It reminds me of something, but I can't for the life of me remember what. I suppose that this déjà-vu thing just means that I get the feeling of reading a really good book. Confusing?
Love it. Completely.
The only thing I wondered about was: what happens when there aren't enough Ravenclaws to continue a line? Or too many? |
| Friday 5th May 2006 09:38 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
so....different
Well, I suppose that's what I was aiming for, so thanks.
As for the number of Ravenclaws, I dealt with that in an arbitrary and non-cannonical way by stating eight first years, four girls and four boys, were always sorted into the House , "never more and never fewer." Well, why not?
If you think you've seen this before, finally, maybe you have. As I note in the intro, a somewhat diffferent (and much longer) version of this story exists. It includes bits altogether unsuitable for the refined readership of PS.net, but shouldn't be that hard to find, as to my knowledge I am the only Jacynthe currently writing HP fanfiction... |
whitestag
Monday 6th March 2006 19:12 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| You write so beautifully and eloquently! I can't wait for more! |
| Tuesday 28th March 2006 20:28 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
| More soon! |
Ladybug
Monday 27th February 2006 20:38 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| This is wonderful, you had me completely engrossed. You’ve taken the marvellous world of Hogwarts and enriched it and made it so much more. Can’t wait to read more. |
| Wednesday 1st March 2006 03:43 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your kind words. There will be more soon, I promise. |
snowbear96
Monday 27th February 2006 10:44 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| So bittersweet and fantastic, I honestly can't wait for more. This is a really unusal slant and so far I love it |
| Wednesday 1st March 2006 03:45 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
| Bittersweet is what I was aiming for -- I'm hoping to avoid cloying ... Thanks for reviewing! |
platypus621
Sunday 26th February 2006 17:34 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| I like this. I really like this. |
| Wednesday 1st March 2006 03:47 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
| Thanks! There should be more soon. |
occlumens
Sunday 26th February 2006 14:27 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw |
| A fascinating perspective. Very unique. Great job! |
| Wednesday 1st March 2006 03:50 | A Few Things I Remember About Ravenclaw (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like the point of view. As you will see in future episodes, it gives a new perspective on familiar events. Stay tuned for the real inside story of the Yule Ball. |
