lionofgryffindor
Tuesday 22nd May 2018 20:53 | Monster |
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J-TGriffy
Saturday 18th February 2012 11:42 | Monster |
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lavanya
Monday 6th February 2012 00:43 | Monster |
| great work |
juice14
Thursday 20th August 2009 03:45 | Monster |
| Very tender moment between H/G... reading on with interest |
nightwing
Sunday 19th October 2008 11:40 | Monster |
| good start I always liked stories with mature rating I always hated reading stories of boring ratings |
gymnastgal19
Monday 11th August 2008 16:36 | Monster |
hehe well then...
thoses hands seem interesting... i wonder if you get them when you are soul mates not with a life debt...
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deadpool
Saturday 4th August 2007 08:15 | Monster |
| awesome this is exactly how i wanted DH to go with the whole gang going hunting for horcruxes. |
Lillie Ann Potter
Tuesday 28th November 2006 13:28 | Monster |
| OH!! HAHAHA!! I have read this one a thousand times and that last line ALWAYS makes me smile!! i love this story!! YOU ROCK!! |
TrainzStoffe
Saturday 21st October 2006 14:20 | Monster |
Ah, 'tis wonderful!
Went through the books cover-to-cover again a little while ago, and this is a worthy (though short) finish to it all. Now I've got to get my head around the fact that the "real thing" probably won't follow this path... I think that says quite a bit about this text.
Great language and the characters are truly believeable! Well worth reading. Would love to read the stuff between the last chapter and the epilogue... |
GryffindorDragon
Monday 9th October 2006 14:42 | Monster |
I like how Harry includes Luna as 'friend' and how she set Harry straight to Ginny .
Now that part about the white hands on her back I have seen before (or have I read this somewhere else?). If its the same story, Harry is going to end up with hand prints on his chest.
Nice play with the 'monster within' .
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DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 19:55 | Monster |
| I love your Harry and Ginny. Very sweet. |
ironicofoeva
Wednesday 22nd March 2006 16:02 | Monster |
| awesome stuff, truly enjoyable read, keep up the good work |
Ladybug
Sunday 19th March 2006 01:14 | Monster |
| Firstly, I want to say thank you for explaining what Ginny's 'hard, blazing look' is about - predatory readiness - that helps me picture it so much better and makes a lot of sense. I really like the balance you've struck with Harry between keeping Ginny safe and not being able to be without her - I like his inability to give her a straight answer or decision. And I like the way your writing fits in nicely with all the HBP language but in no way does it sound repetitive or cliched or copied - it's got a real feel of originality about it that makes for a very enjoyable read. |
critmo
Saturday 18th March 2006 11:24 | Monster |
| I think I've read this before, but I didn't leave a review. Or have you published this elsewhere? - Anyway, I agree with every single reason Ginny has come up with. Promising start. |
| Saturday 18th March 2006 16:21 | Monster (Author Response) |
I think I've read this before, but I didn't leave a review. Or have you published this elsewhere? - Anyway, I agree with every single reason Ginny has come up with. Promising start.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Yes, I've published this elsewhere--six chapters and an epilogue. Nonetheless, I'd love to know what you think of the rest. |
parakletos
Thursday 16th March 2006 06:37 | Monster |
So the monster has a new place to live does it ?
Its been a while since I read a fic that involved a life debt so I'm interested in how you deal with this. Good start. |
