potters_love_redheads
Thursday 18th March 2010 10:53 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Haha! Marvelous hex indeed. I love that Ginny gets the better of that pretentious prat, he needed someone to knock him down a peg |
DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 19:46 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Hahaha! Loved it. Wonderful missing moment. Absolutely brilliant. Keep up the great work. |
cckeimig
Tuesday 11th April 2006 20:22 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Very fun missing moment. |
Penny Lane
Tuesday 11th April 2006 14:23 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
I was just talking about this particular missing moment from canon with a friend the other day and wondering if there were any good fics about it. And lo an behold, Antosha comes through.
You did a creepily good job of making Smith seem really smarmy. He reminded me of a few guys I\'ve encountered myself, which is perhaps why he made me shudder so much. I also liked the detail of Zabini staring at Ginny, especially compared with the way he seemed to be determinedly nonchalant about her in the following canon scenes.
And though it\'s already been said by everyone, I just have to add: \"...as if someone had taken his new puppy away from him\". Aw, poor Harry. I wanted to hug him. |
critmo
Tuesday 11th April 2006 06:23 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Great story, very amusing, even if Smith seems a little too ambitious, perhaps. Haven't I read this somewhere else before? |
aschowin
Tuesday 11th April 2006 00:04 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Great story. You got me to laugh, which isn't easy; but the way you wrote Ginny's thoughts was really touching, and true to her character. Excellent job. |
Evelyn
Monday 10th April 2006 03:52 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
"as if someone had taken his new puppy away from him"
I already laughed the first time this appeared, so the second time was just .. brilliant.
This story is excellent! I'm off to read your other ones... |
Ladybug
Monday 10th April 2006 00:24 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| I love this sotry - the detail is great, from Smith to Zabini to Slughorn to Dean to Ginny herself - a wonderful rendering of this particular moment. I especially enjoyed Fleur's influence on Ginny's vocabulary - she's not so awful after all, compared with some of the gits on the train! Thanks for this, it's very enjoyable and expertly written! |
Musings
Sunday 9th April 2006 19:49 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| This is just outstanding! One of the best missing moments I've ever read! I love the way you've written Ginny...I look forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
willow
Sunday 9th April 2006 16:39 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
that was fun! i would never have thought to look at that missing moment- good catch!!
plus, loving the stolen puppy look- good visual, can picture it well |
parakletos
Sunday 9th April 2006 14:50 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
And Harry. Looking as if she’d stolen his puppy.
Great line and a great fic. |
bjon66
Sunday 9th April 2006 12:26 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
That was a good story... Though i'm not a big fan of ginny, its interesting
through her POV... Can't wait for next chapter... |
bibliophile20
Sunday 9th April 2006 12:15 | The Most Marvelous Bat-Bogey Hex |
| Still a pleasure to read, even for the fifth or sixth time... |
