majolie
Wednesday 2nd January 2008 13:48 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| This was brilliant. I was so upset when Snape died, even though I never liked him, I felt he deserved some recompense for his years of mistreatment. This is much more satisfactory from that point of view and also very well-written. |
cckeimig
Sunday 4th February 2007 18:40 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
Oh, I love it!
Yeah, I know. You published this way back in June. What can I say? Seriously backlogged here... |
Ishi
Sunday 2nd July 2006 00:05 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Oh, wonderful twist! And such brilliant characterisation. Very good, really. I'm going to add you to my list of favourite authors. |
critmo
Monday 26th June 2006 10:25 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Interesting story, since I believe that Snape is not a traitor. Still, I was hoping to find a different girl at Harry's side. |
Connor Landon
Saturday 24th June 2006 21:39 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
Aw! That's awesome! Not a little confusing, but it was good nonetheless. I love the closing sentence: Harry turned to her and said "No, Hermione... not a cobra. A Phoenix." Wicked cool! Just a question: What was your version of Ron and Ginny's fates? I may have missed that somewhere, my eyes were scanning the screen so quickly. Very good little blurb, as my English teacher would say. |
freshwater
Saturday 24th June 2006 20:10 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Very intriguing and thought-provoking. I was thinking he was Karkaroff for a short bit there, then maybe Victor Krum for just a few sentences. Very well developed and well revealed. |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 22nd June 2006 08:24 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Nice piece. I enjoyed it. |
Shadow Hider
Wednesday 21st June 2006 21:08 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Interesting point of view, I thought it was Igor for a bit with all the talk of Durmstrang |
girl from ipanema
Wednesday 21st June 2006 11:37 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| Oh, this is very good! I like the characterizations, the lovely flow of the narrative and it is a VERY possible scenario. Good work |
jessy
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:12 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
| i still dont trust snape! |
thisgrlrox
Tuesday 20th June 2006 20:11 | The Ringing of the Empty Sound |
Flitwick a spy!? Oh my! Snape in charge of Hogwarts with Harry's support!? I don't know what to say to that one. I think there might be too much bad blood between Harry and Snape for that to happen...even if Snape does something heroic in the final battle. Where are the Weasley family? Did they all make it? It unsettled me a bit that Harry and Hermione were with McGonagal and Ron and Ginny were nowhere to be found. I'll try not to read into that for my own well being.
That said, you wrote a lovely story. I liked that it was from Snape's point of view. I looke forward to reading more from you. |
