Felix Felicis
Tuesday 29th August 2006 18:09 | Through and Through |
| I can really feel the loneliness in this chapter. Poor Harry! I liked how you had him thinking about Ginny and how much he missed her, but at the same time knowing that there was no animosity in their separation. Well written. |
Ladybug
Wednesday 16th August 2006 19:42 | Through and Through |
| Oh, and forgot to say how much I adore your story title and summary - that just gave me a tear in the eye and a warm heart. I look forward to seeing it play out through the story. |
| Thursday 17th August 2006 12:03 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| To be entirely honest, my beta Katie made vast improvements to the summary that I had suggested. If not for her, I doubt that anyone would have actually read this. Thank you very much for your thoughts on the story though. I hope you continue reading this story and enjoying it. |
Ladybug
Wednesday 16th August 2006 19:38 | Through and Through |
| Wonderful start! I think your depiction of Harry and Ginny’s parting was perfect – exactly how I imagine and want it to be. You’ve covered some interesting and plausible theories on how to hunt for the Horcruxes so I will eagerly read to find out how the hunt continues. Very nice mood and lovely expression, I really felt Harry’s emotions. Keep up the great work. |
Stormdelver
Monday 14th August 2006 15:03 | Through and Through |
| I like it- very heart wrenching to see his pain over Ginny, but with great promise. The story has a nice beginning and a sure footing- so let be off and whatever path it may be. Best wishes. |
| Monday 14th August 2006 21:57 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| Thanks for taking the time to read this, it means a lot to me. I really appreciate the time you took to review as well. Hope you come back for the next chapter. |
Arnel
Friday 11th August 2006 14:43 | Through and Through |
| I really like this first chapter. It has a lot of possibilities and I'm really interested in where you are going to take Harry and company on his search. You did a really good job of portraying the solitude in which Harry has forced himself to live. Looking forward to chapter 2. |
| Friday 11th August 2006 22:37 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| I'm really glad you liked this first chapter, and I hope that what follows will keep you reading. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think. |
EmeraldPrincess
Friday 11th August 2006 14:29 | Through and Through |
Excellent first chapter! I love it ^_^
Update soon!!!! |
| Friday 11th August 2006 22:35 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to get more up soon. |
SillyGillie
Friday 11th August 2006 12:59 | Through and Through |
| Nice. I can't wait to see where the story goes next! |
| Friday 11th August 2006 22:34 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Hope you enjoy. |
Evelyn
Friday 11th August 2006 08:08 | Through and Through |
What a wonderful start for a hopefully long story!
You've already given us a perfect description of Harry and Ginny's relationship. Very believable. I loved the quiet talks you mentioned, dancing together, giving each other a goodbye kiss - and I'm glad you only wrote them as flashbacks. This sounds terribly stupid. I'm a sucker for fluff, and I love to read those sweet little scenes, but after reading too many wedding pieces, it's wonderful to read a story again that also features Ron and Hermione, because that is how HBP ended. (I hope this doesn't sound too weird.)
I loved how you hinted at places they would still have to search for Horcruxes, and how Harry reflected on Voldemort's life. I have a feeling that you're preparing a very good story there. I only wondered about the locket; that was a bit vague. They tracked it down, but have they got it yet and destroyed it? I hope you're explaining about that in the next chapter(s).
I'm looking forward to seeing the story unfold. |
| Friday 11th August 2006 22:33 | Through and Through (Author Response) |
| Thanks for taking the time to read this and comment, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed some of the more intimate character scenes. I will explain more about the locket in the next chapter. Hope you keep reading . |
