DaniKay
Sunday 5th April 2009 19:58 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
It had been a happy accident – just like Jack.
Fred ducked his head with mock modesty. “Mother Nature was generous.” Lee looked from one identical face to the other. “Or she had a good sense of humor.”
LMFAO!!! Wow, haha I didn't think I'd ever stop laughing! I'm still chuckling actually.
Anyway, loved this oneshot! So funny, fluffy and cute!
*winks* amazing! Genius even!!
DaniKay
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DaniKay
Sunday 5th April 2009 19:51 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
It had been a happy accident – just like Jack.
Fred ducked his head with mock modesty. “Mother Nature was generous.” Lee looked from one identical face to the other. “Or she had a good sense of humor.”
LMFAO!!! Wow, haha I didn't think I'd ever stop laughing! I'm still chuckling actually.
Anyway, loved this oneshot! So funny, fluffy and cute!
*winks* amazing! Genius even!!
DaniKay
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| Monday 6th April 2009 06:20 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
LOL - I'm always disqualified from these challenges because I use my own characters and everyone knows it's me. I had fun with this, even though I knew I wouldn't win anything.
There are only two more stories from this little universe:
http://stmargarets.livejournal.com/tag/fred/angelina
http://www.phoenixsong.net/fanfiction/story/5133/ |
snowbear96
Sunday 21st December 2008 00:41 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Utterly wonderful. I still love Lee and Holly. |
Hollu
Tuesday 29th April 2008 09:50 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Love it! |
| Tuesday 29th April 2008 13:01 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 26th April 2008 21:11 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
haha!! that was awesome! I love how lee just blurted that out during the match :p
hehe i love the edning
especially our anniversary... i sure hope so :p
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| Tuesday 29th April 2008 13:00 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Lee is a great character. Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th December 2007 20:32 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
hehe nice chapter i love how lee just spilled everything.
loved the ending
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lacyrachil
Sunday 26th November 2006 20:28 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Nice way to work in all the Phoenix Song stuff...I'm partial to Melinda Leo myself |
| Monday 27th November 2006 09:17 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I think many people are! Thanks for reading! |
Astarte
Sunday 12th November 2006 17:37 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Very sweet, and very accurate to the life of a mom who knows her spouse well. Thanks for the lovely read and sweet tribute to Phoenix Song! |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 18:55 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! Those first few months with baby are wonderfully full and such a huge change - so it's good when you realize some things stay the same . . Thanks for reading! |
Melindaleo
Sunday 12th November 2006 08:54 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Snort! Oh, my goodness, Mary! I dont' know how I missed that! What a hoot!! You're too funny, but I'm honored to gain a mention in one of your beloved stories - particularly through WWW. I do so love those twins. Now that I'm done with the writing, I see I have a lot of reading to do to catch up and have some other things here make sense to me! Thanks much! |
| Sunday 12th November 2006 11:44 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| LOL. You don't have to read the other story. It's not HBP compliant. This story is really an inside joke since Tour Guide was full of inside jokes. (I think I managed to include fifty reviewer names by the time I was done. It's just a Lee thing) Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 9th November 2006 16:43 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Aww. That was cute. |
Josie C
Thursday 2nd November 2006 17:54 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Looooooove it!!! I just absolutely love all your stories, but esp. Lee and Holly! Thank you soooo much! |
| Friday 3rd November 2006 09:10 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Hi Josie! It's good to see you again! I'm glad you liked this little wrap up of Lee and Holly's life. I had a good time writing it. |
snowbear96
Wednesday 1st November 2006 11:16 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Awww wonderful I loved seeing Holly and Lee again, they had a baby! Squeee. You continue to be great at encorporating different elements into the fic. |
| Wednesday 1st November 2006 18:54 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you were happy to see H/L again. I didn't know how much people would remember. Jack will have a great childhood, don't you think? |
shannon
Tuesday 31st October 2006 15:29 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
I thought this was your fic, but then I thought that would be too obvious. Maybe somebody borrowed your "world" for their fic (with permission, no profit being made, etc). Anyway, very cute story -- a great way to work in all the anniversaries. Lee and Holly are great characters. It's nice to see them again. I've always wanted to know what happened to Harry and Ginny that night in the caves. Or what Harry was thinking that first night at Aunt Martha's (giggle). Sigh, and no answers were forthcoming in this fic. (pouts)
By the way, I love the name Jack. My darling son, who turns one tomorrow, is named Jack! |
| Tuesday 31st October 2006 19:31 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
LOL - never underestimate me and obvious. I'm terrible with secrets, disguises and all of that !
I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that's so nice you remember Magic Within. Poor Harry - I did put him through a lot in that story, didn't I?
Jack is going to be one tomorrow! Oh, congratulations. I love that year between one and two - they grow and change into little people. (And you get more sleep!) I've always like that name, too!
Thanks for your review on LJ. I left you a response there, too! |
buckbeakbabie
Tuesday 31st October 2006 11:33 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
Oh, so perfect! Its been so long since I read Lee Jordan: Tour Guide, and this story has reminded me that I have to re read it soon.
I love how Lee is still blurting things out on the air, and baby Jack! *melts into a pile of goo* Sigh.
Well done! and congratualtions on winning! |
| Tuesday 31st October 2006 19:27 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you remembered Tour Guide, it was a long time ago! LOL. I don't think Lee would be Lee without blurting out something impulsive every now and again! Thanks for reading! |
amamama
Monday 30th October 2006 06:50 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
Weee! Lee has a son! Lovely ficlet! To bad I never managed to get through all the entries, and thus never voted, because this would indeed have had my vote. Several, if I'd managed. I repeat myself when reviewing your stories - I love them. The stories flow effortlessly and I absolutely love MU (Mary's Universe). Lee's such a charmer, and his and Holly's conversation at the end is just perfect.
Thanks!
Coffe and cake on the house.
Berte |
| Monday 30th October 2006 10:59 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
There were a lot of stories, weren't there? I'm glad you liked this story and are excited about little Jack Jordan. Poor Amy Weasley (Padma and George's girl) has such a crush on this charming older boy when she is at Hogwarts. (LOL. Gabby and I figured it all out.) Kevin Boot keeps asking her out, but she wants nothing to do with the son of Mandy Brocklehurst and Terry Boot. Ah, it's fun to have a universe. And it was fun to write Lee and Holly again. I do like them as characters!
Thanks for reading! |
Ladybug
Saturday 28th October 2006 22:29 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| So charming! I especially loved the original Weird Sisters - ooh, would they dare say that to McGongall's face?! That'd be a sight to see. But you're teasing me with the Weasley's Wizard Wheezes thing, aren't you? Ah well, I asked for it. This is a lovely update on a lovely story - thanks! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 06:14 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| We'll get that corrected now that the contest is over. I'm glad you remembered the original story. Thanks for reading! |
Inken
Saturday 28th October 2006 13:10 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
Wonderful story, very funny.
The only thing I didn't like all that much, was inserting Phoenix Song... I didn't semm right, somehow. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:01 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| The name dropping is a joke for the people who have read Lee Jordan:Tour Guide. (To which this is a little epilogue) Thanks for reading! |
ninkenate
Tuesday 24th October 2006 17:59 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| You did a great job showing the trials of new parents. I wonder about Lee though if he trusts Fred and George with his newborn son after all the products they put him through. It could be dangerous for a small, defensless child. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:02 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I don't think Holly will let them get all that close for a long while, so no worries there. Thanks for reading! |
wokka42
Sunday 22nd October 2006 00:26 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| What a fabulous little story! I'm happy to see the best moments of Lee's story reprised here - Lee's cheeky Quidditch commentary, Angelina's constant badgering of Lee and her sweet sniffly response to becoming a godmother, Lee and the twins having another impromptu drinking session in lawnchairs, sweet beautiful Holly and her almost-dimples. It's so good to see them all again! This is a tasty little concoction, and it's such a clever way to approach this challenge. Nice work! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:03 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like it, since you were such a big part of the original story! (And I'm glad I finally had a chance to respond to your review!) Thanks for reading! |
Arnel
Friday 20th October 2006 21:23 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| I really enjoyed this one. Lee's commentary and improv advertising made me smile; especially afterwards when he thinks he's going to be in trouble for spilling the beans on-air. I could really identify with Holly's anxiety regarding her little one; there's something in the maternal instinct that just doesn't allow a new mother to sleep when she thinks she should be keeping vigil. I'm glad she found the time to rest so she could give Lee the attention he didn't know he was craving. Beautifully written... |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:05 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| LOL. Holly's obsession is taken directly from real life! Honestly - that first three months is a blur - then you get a few hours sleep at once and wow! The world comes back into focus. Glad you liked this. I really enjoyed re-visiting these characters. |
lissabee
Friday 20th October 2006 11:26 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| I liked this story! I was so excited to recognize it from her Lee Jordan story. That was always one of my favorites and it has been awhile since I read it but I remembered it all. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:07 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I was wondering if anyone would remember (or care) about these characters. I'm so glad you did! Thanks for reading! |
RdeHwyll
Tuesday 17th October 2006 15:08 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Very cute bit of fluff -- had me laughing, anyway. Good luck in the competition! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:16 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading! A Lee Jordan story should be a little funny, I think! |
critmo
Tuesday 17th October 2006 12:04 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| I like it how you warped fiction, canon and reality. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:17 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Warping is always fun! Thanks for reading! |
Antosha
Tuesday 17th October 2006 10:41 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
YAY! YAY!
Lee and Holly! And Jim! And Fred and George! And Jack! Hurray!
This bit really made me laugh:
“No, the wee bairn came out with –”
“Dreds.”
“And dimples,” George added.
“And he cries like a Scot who paid retail.”
:snort: |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:18 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| It's always fun to give F&G some rope and see how far they will go. I only had three thousand words to play with, so I to keep their part short. Thanks for reading! |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 17th October 2006 10:14 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
Cute story -- some nice humor (and a couple shameless plugs ). But as innovative as working the Anniverisary Challenge into the story might be, it kind of spoiled it for me.
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| Monday 30th October 2006 11:16 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| The name dropping is a joke the readers of Lee Jordan Tour Guide would get - and I can see how it would seem weird to anyone who hadn't read that story. |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 17th October 2006 09:58 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
I am so fond of the universe with Lee and Holly and baby Jack. It's nice to catch up with them again. Fred and George and McGuffin were "spot on".
However, I had hoped for an update on Days of Destiny. Maybe when Holly has more time. She could listen while she paints?
Delightful and full of details. I love it! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:15 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| LOL. You and your Days of Destiny. Speaking of which, I will get to your story sometime later today! Thanks for reading as always! |
Astrid
Monday 16th October 2006 20:44 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Haha, it's my favorite author. Good luck in the contest. I know you'll do great. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:13 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| LOL. How did you know it was me? Or did you guess someone else? Hmmm. I'll have to think about this! Thanks for reading! |
girlyswot
Monday 16th October 2006 16:51 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| I loved it! I'm so glad someone else spends time imagining 'what happened next'. I really like Holly and Lee together in Tour Guide and this is equally sweet. I love that he's so nervous about telling her and that she understands him so perfectly. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:12 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| Aw, thanks for remembering Lee/Holly! I think we discussed Jack a while ago, didn't we? He was fun to consider, as well as what issues they would have as new parents. Thanks for reading! |
dogstar33
Monday 16th October 2006 15:42 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Thank you sooo much for this cute little story, I love finding out what happened to Lee and Holly,the only problem with your stories is that they have to end. Now for the next one! I can't wait! |
| Monday 30th October 2006 11:10 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| It was fun to re-visit these two. They were a joy to write at the time and so much fun to consider two years later. Thanks for remembering them and for reading! |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Monday 16th October 2006 15:10 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
Hardly fair to write a story for an anonymous writing competition using such well known characters. I love your Holly/Lee story, and this is a delightful addition - nice touch with the Seventh Horcrux ad!
May we all celebrate anniversaries the way Lee and Holly do. |
| Monday 30th October 2006 06:13 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| LOL. How did you know it wasn't my beta? Or someone else? Right. I'm glad you remembered Lee/Holly. It was fun to write them again. |
Stephanie
Monday 16th October 2006 13:35 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale |
| Excellent . I loved the original story so it's nice to read an 'epilogue' like this |
| Monday 30th October 2006 06:12 | Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes Third Anniversary Sale (Author Response) |
| I'm glad the original story was remembered! LOL. It's been awhile! Thanks for reading! |
