Professor Webster
Friday 8th June 2007 16:06 | Only the Good Die Young |
| This was a wonderful pastishe. The idea of J.k. Rowling being a witch is a great one. Too bad you killed off the three friends but that I can understand. I wonder how you would rewrite it after you've read the last book? |
pyromain
Tuesday 5th June 2007 09:35 | Only the Good Die Young |
although harry is dead in this story, I must say that it is a lovely story.
One almost feels that this is the real truth when reading it.
I love reading story's and this was for sure one of my favorites (and I know its my favorite of those in which harry dies, because I normaly hate them) i've seen enough of death these past years. |
Patches
Sunday 6th May 2007 12:57 | Only the Good Die Young |
| There are so many speculations about how the series will end. I like this story. It makes a kind of closure for all the heartache and stress that permeates the whole story. I am going to print it out and save it for later. I have been an avid fan fiction fan since my daughter introduced me to it several years ago. Thank you for writing. p |
hahaheeheehaha
Saturday 30th December 2006 04:23 | Only the Good Die Young |
| aww loved it |
lacyrachil
Sunday 26th November 2006 20:02 | Only the Good Die Young |
| That felt so real while reading it. Amazingly moving and real. My heart simply clutches. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 25th October 2006 15:17 | Only the Good Die Young |
Hooray! At last, some constructive criticism -- often my constructuve criticism doesn't receive this kind of response . |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 24th October 2006 17:08 | Only the Good Die Young |
Interesting to have JKR as a witch.
'extensively edited before being released in the Muggle world' -- so we don't have the real story in canon?
'a still repentant Draco Malfoy' -- perhaps unknown because of the extensive editing?
too sad; though I don't think all three will, I fear either Ron or Hermione will indeed be lost -- a nice touch with them taking her sorrow.
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| Wednesday 25th October 2006 10:24 | Only the Good Die Young (Author Response) |
Hooray! At last, some constructive criticism.
"extensively edited before being released in the muggle world" - my thinking here was the "names and places have been changed" type stuff. After all, the Ministry wouldn't want hordes of Muggles wandering about, for example, Kings Cross Station trying to find the entrance to platform 93/4.
"a still repentant Draco Malfoy" - just my idea of how his charachter will develop in the last book. I'm hopeful he might see the error of his ways.
Pervesely, I'm actually rather pleased if you found the story too sad. That was the whole point behind it! |
Lacingrey
Sunday 22nd October 2006 01:20 | Only the Good Die Young |
| You wrote this beautifully. It's so fitting that they all stick together through to the end, and although I would really hate it if they really did all die, you managed to pull this off so well that it seems almost right. |
sparklespaz
Friday 20th October 2006 07:23 | Only the Good Die Young |
| Aw, man.....I got chills while I was reading this. I loved it! I have no idea what else to say except that it was brilliant, wonderful, fantastic, etc.....You are an amazing writer and you should keep doing it. |
parakletos
Friday 20th October 2006 01:42 | Only the Good Die Young |
| A very bleak picture, let's hope you're wrong eh? |
Astrid
Thursday 19th October 2006 21:53 | Only the Good Die Young |
| Wow. Brilliant concept, and bittersweet ending. |
RdeHwyll
Thursday 19th October 2006 21:51 | Only the Good Die Young |
| VERY well written... though I would have preferred a happier ending. But still an excellent 'fortelling'. I just hope you're only as accurate at reading the future as a certain instructor who was dismissed at Hogwarts by the Grand Inquisitor... |
| Friday 20th October 2006 02:23 | Only the Good Die Young (Author Response) |
VERY well written... though I would have preferred a happier ending. But still an excellent 'fortelling'. I just hope you're only as accurate at reading the future as a certain instructor who was dismissed at Hogwarts by the Grand Inquisitor...
Well. I certainly hope that the story doesn't end like that. But since I started reading fanfics, I've noticed that most post-Hogwarts stories either have all three surviving, or Ron and Hermione but not Harry. I just thought I'd even things up a bit... |
harry_ginnyphile
Thursday 19th October 2006 20:02 | Only the Good Die Young |
| I think you just touched upon everyone's worst nightmare for the end of the series. Absolutely heart-stopping and bone-chilling, yet so very well written. |
sueg
Thursday 19th October 2006 19:24 | Only the Good Die Young |
hmm, do you think...? maybe? hmm, nah, couldn't be, or could it?
Liked the tone and the visuals... nice job. |
