gymnastgal19
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 07:52 | I Loved Her First |
love it!!! the flashbacks are nice. cinderella was also my favourite bedtime story
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Delfino
Monday 8th January 2007 15:55 | I Loved Her First |
Is it stupid to say I got a little teary-eyed? Well, I did! As soon as I saw this was based on a song, I went and played it while reading this. You can only imagine my reaction:
Hehe. Anyway, this is very thoughtful and I liked it very much--it gave me hope that maybe sometime this may happen in the books! Thank you for writing this, you obviously know how to tug on just the right heartstrings. Please continue to write!
Delfino |
maroonout777
Thursday 4th January 2007 17:18 | I Loved Her First |
| i love that song and your story was so sweet with it |
ginnysohma
Tuesday 2nd January 2007 00:04 | I Loved Her First |
| bravo! beautiful! |
Astrid
Saturday 30th December 2006 21:52 | I Loved Her First |
| I usually don't like songfics, but this is great. Good work! |
Sirius Lee Brilliant
Saturday 30th December 2006 21:32 | I Loved Her First |
| That was so cute!! The song fit perfectly! Very nice story. |
Sirius Lee Brilliant
Saturday 30th December 2006 21:32 | I Loved Her First |
| That was so cute!! The song fit perfectly! Very nice story. |
sweetdreamer285
Saturday 30th December 2006 14:07 | I Loved Her First |
*beaming*
I have come to love Arthur fics in regards to his little girl this past year.
What a sweet way to end the year w/ this one. Thank you! |
mary-v
Saturday 30th December 2006 12:18 | I Loved Her First |
eeeeeeeeeeee!! *squee* Aww I loved it!
And the lyrics were so wonderful for this song; a perfect fit! |
meddymo
Saturday 30th December 2006 09:38 | I Loved Her First |
| That was a lovely story, and I like the way you incorporated the song lyrics. The only suggestion I have is that it might have been nice for them to name the baby after both Molly and Lilly, like Lillian Molly Potter, or something. But it was still a nice sentimental piece--well done. |
Ashlerose
Friday 29th December 2006 14:26 | I Loved Her First |
| Heartwarming. Excellent song, fits the story well, and you combined the story and the song very well. Good work. |
lantis222
Friday 29th December 2006 07:43 | I Loved Her First |
| Now I'm on the verge of tears, that was beautiful. You really captured the wonder and sadness of watching your children grow. Very good job! |
