gymnastgal19
Sunday 31st August 2008 17:11 | The Right Choice |
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| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 17:28 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
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pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 10:43 | The Right Choice |
| beautifull, and the end is funny will Hermione and Ron marry soon after all? |
| Monday 25th June 2007 09:59 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
I don't believe they will get married in the near future. Poor Mrs Weasley, and poor Ron and Hermione... I'm afraid Ron will have a couple of rows with his mother
So glad you liked it. |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 22:49 | The Right Choice |
| A very good proposal story. Of course Molly would jump to the wrong conclusion at an inopportune time. That just adds to the fun. Very well done. Thanks for writing. p |
| Monday 30th April 2007 01:47 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Poor Ron and Hermione, huh? |
Lily Jane
Friday 20th April 2007 05:57 | The Right Choice |
I've just read the rest of your stories, and like all of them, but I just couldn't not to review on this one.
I love the way you wrote conversations. They sound very real and natural, and despite it being the biggest part you avoided making it "ready-to-play-on-the-scene" kind of drama. Lovely work |
| Friday 20th April 2007 07:03 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Thanks for letting me know you read my stories, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
cckeimig
Friday 12th January 2007 12:41 | The Right Choice |
| Oh, too good! I love the ending especially. Brilliant. |
| Friday 12th January 2007 12:49 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Heh, thanks! |
jessy
Wednesday 10th January 2007 17:30 | The Right Choice |
That was so cool!
i loved it! |
| Thursday 11th January 2007 07:56 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Thanks; I'm glad you liked it! |
mary-v
Wednesday 10th January 2007 11:30 | The Right Choice |
| Great work! Loved it. Very sweet and lovely! |
| Wednesday 10th January 2007 11:48 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Ooh, thanks! |
EJH0904
Tuesday 9th January 2007 21:18 | The Right Choice |
| Very Nice Indeed! |
| Wednesday 10th January 2007 05:32 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Thank You! |
Kamalia
Tuesday 9th January 2007 19:09 | The Right Choice |
Haha! I love the part at the end, with Molly "discovering" their "secret"! So funny! And I like the names of the jewellers, too. It's pretty.
Good job and can't wait for more. |
| Wednesday 10th January 2007 05:31 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| You have no idea how good it is to hear I made you laugh... Thanks! |
Ladybug
Tuesday 9th January 2007 17:48 | The Right Choice |
Oh, that was really fun! I just adored both of the shopping expeditions because it is exactly the way I shop when I’m out with my hubby. Ron and Ginny perfectly illustrated the Hunter/Gatherer theory of shopping (to which my hubby subscribes): men are hunters – they go to the shops, ‘spear’ the first item they see and bring it home triumphant; women are gatherers – they visit every single shop and examine every possible item, gather all the pertinent information (price, quality, suitability, etc etc) before making their selection. Of course, Ginny also had a subconscious agenda working! But even Hermione and Harry fit the mould:
Taking Hermione with him had been a bad idea, Harry realised too late. But it could not be helped now.
"I didn't like any of the jewellery displayed here," he lied. To be honest, some things had looked rather nice, but The Ring was what he wanted, nothing else.
"But there are very pretty rings here," Hermione said. "And there is more inside."
I really enjoyed the girls’ conversation, Hermione being so matter-of-fact and Ginny challenging her every statement. And I just loved Ron’s un-proposal – hilarious! In fact, I think you do conversations really, really well. I feel like quoting the whole thing back at you. Great story.
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| Wednesday 10th January 2007 05:27 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
Hunter/Gatherer theory - I like the sound of that; suffered from it often enough. So there are more people who feel like Ginny, Hermione and me
Conversations -yes, I find them a lot easier to write than other things... I'm really glad you liked it! |
girlyswot
Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:18 | The Right Choice |
| Oh and I laughed when I read about you naming the jewellers after the ones in your home town. I did exactly the same. And no, I'm not telling you in which fic and who. |
| Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:30 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
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girlyswot
Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:17 | The Right Choice |
| I liked this a lot. I envy the way you make your characters develop so naturally during this series of interactions so that where they end up seems so entirely right for them all. And I definitely think H/G much more likely to marry young. They're both fairly simple people with a straightforward attitude to their relationship. Unlike R/Hr who, if they end up together at all as adults, will need to do a whole lot of growing up and working things out and settling down. IMHO! |
| Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:30 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
That's why I like R&H - they're so wonderfully complicated...
where they end up seems so entirely right for them all
Oh, I hoped I'd be able to do that. Thanks so much
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Melindaleo
Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:05 | The Right Choice |
Snort! Okay, this was an entirely enjoyable read. My favorite part? - Harry trying to size Ginny's finger while she's sleeping and her cracking an eye and telling him what he needed to know. Hee! That's my girl!
I could totally see each of the couples feeling this way. Harry, in particular, I think will want to marry young. Hermione's view on Muggles, however, well, I found it rather dismal. I think I like the wizarding way better. The only thing left that I still would have liked to see was the twins making Percy suffer a bit. I also liked the idea of Hermione becoming a clean freak, lol. I could SO see that, but I wonder if Harry would grimace thinking of Aunt Petunia. |
| Tuesday 9th January 2007 11:24 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
Ooh, you picked my favourite scene!
Hermione's view is rather dismal, yes, but I think she's always very decided in her opinions, and things tend to come out mush harsher than she means them.
The twins and Percy... That's an idea. I admit, though, that I didn't want Percy's part to become too long so I could focus on the two couples. Well, since I didn't write it, I'd be happy to read someone else's version on that
Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. |
Hank
Tuesday 9th January 2007 08:43 | The Right Choice |
That was brilliant!
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| Tuesday 9th January 2007 09:13 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| Glad it made you laugh! |
Starbuck_23
Monday 8th January 2007 22:28 | The Right Choice |
| Very sweet! I would have thought the opposite would be true (Harry and Ginny not wanting to stick with tradition), but this worked out really well instead. Well done! |
| Tuesday 9th January 2007 07:56 | The Right Choice (Author Response) |
| To be honest, Harry and Ginny even surprised me a bit... Thanks for reviewing! |
