Thorn
Sunday 16th May 2010 03:36 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I think that religion adds depth and feel it is wonderful in this story.
And I am not religious! |
JustAFan
Wednesday 8th July 2009 19:07 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Reading it again. I would hate to have to play poker against your Harry. I enjoy that his instincts are excellent, and that he hangs on until he's in the carriage to collapse; such a good soldier. Poor Albus. I hope that this old dog learns some new tricks and that the Spell Monger can improve on the flaws of the remedy he currently muddles through with. A more put together Dumbledore would make for a very powerful ally, but then the muses would probably require that he be sacrificed in some manner. Oh well. The chapter is not my favorite, but it is definitely the most intense. Bravo for that. I need to go calm down now. ;-) |
spuffie77
Friday 17th April 2009 21:40 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| I find myself unworthy to review this earthshakingly great story, nevertheless I shall attempt to do you honor. Your portrayal of the characters in this story is spot on, I truly enjoyed the interactions between Harry, Snape, Dumbledore, and Remus at their meeting. You have portrayed Harry with honor, POWER, and distinction, as well as his famous compassion, and intelligence. What a great boon the book Dobby provided is. With its information, and the great great courage of Harry, despite the continued foolishness of the Ministry and Fudge(heh.. Fudge... he IS fudge.. get it?), Harry's great bravery and POWER, and intelligence helps him to avert another vampire war, and the vampires that might have joined Voldishorts. So well written, so believable, a truly gripping adventure that finds our hero saving perhaps thousands of lives again, and with such STYLE, oh what style. I also very much enjoy and support your "religious" portrayal of the Father Martin and the eternal battle of Good vs Evil. Why not? It fits like a glove. It adds feeling to the story. If only all people could keep an open mind perhaps they might enjoy, rather than bash. I can't tell you how much I am enjoying your story. I request that you please please do not abandon this story, it is worthy, perhaps a classic on its own, even though the characters of your story existed before your writing genius continued thier epic journey. I hope that i have conveyed a small portion of my admiration of your great work of art, this story. All of your inventive ideas about the Grangers, the Paladin Program, Dobby, the Spell Monger Book seem so well thought out and perfectly executed, it must have taken a great deal of time to create and perfect these ideas into this story. Thank you thank you THANK YOU! |
aharkins
Sunday 15th June 2008 20:13 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I'm loving your story. With or without religion, it's an excellent read. Sorry to hear that people have complained. It's your story - write it your way.
Thanks for sharing your work. |
huskers
Saturday 29th December 2007 20:48 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
It's your story, if you want to increase the role of religion in it, go ahead.
Harry almost perfectly reads the goblins, then he handles Dumbledore, and now he comes up with a perfect read of the vampires. Too much.
How can Dawlish and the other aruor who attacked Harry still be out and about? Just a question. They did attack an underage citizen correct?
Harry's mini thunderfire, the one that saved his life when attacked by the Vampire. This was something I though was really good. I also like how in protecting the other two Vampires, he earned their friendship. I also like that the death cures can't kill Vampires. I'm surprised Harry didn't try to stop the justice that was handed down to the Vampire.
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lilpumpkin
Saturday 1st December 2007 12:09 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| I wanted to stop for a moment not so much to review the story, which I am growing increasingly fond of, this mature Harry is taking a while to get used to, but more to review the author/beta notes. I am decidedly predjudiced against the Christian religion, and, after a few very heated debates with friends, Christians, that I respect and admire, have had to come to terms with that. I studies many religions, and found concepts from alot of them, specifically paganism/polytheism, close to what I choose to believe, but find almost all religions, or maybe just dimply faith, to be beautiful... "except what modern and past organized religion has done to (insert biased and stereotypical anti-christian views here)". I am doing my best to get over that and accept faith in anything good to be a good thing, but, getting back to the authors comments, magic is a very religious topic, and I agree that, while the Harry Potter world is fictional, most of what makes up the setting of the magical world is steeped in religious tradition from somewhere and sometime or other. I don't see how anyone could complain about a fanfiction author taking canon concepts and exploring them further. I thought that was the basic purpose for sites like this existing. All aspects of this story have been introduced in a creative and cohesive way. Bravo. |
Greg
Sunday 11th November 2007 21:17 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Author, this is probably my third or fourth reading of this story. That is how much I enjoy this story. Your use of of the Christian religion in this story, I believe, provides an integral part to your tale. Please accept the thanks of a practicing Catholic in your attempt to weave Christianity into your stories. I find it highly enjoyable and only wish you could post your chapters more swiftly so that I could get to the end of this tale sooner. Until then, I will continue to read story, multiple times. It is simply that enjoyable. God b;ess and good luck.
Greg Boling |
Bryher
Thursday 19th April 2007 16:42 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Hmmm. I had no intention of criticising your bringing Christianity into the story, but I think the rant at the end was a little bit OTT! You could have put your argument a little less confrontationally, I think. But personally, I've enjoyed the bits with Father Martin and the church, and religion, as sanctuary for Harry.
In fact, the only bit of the story so far I considered "flaming" you for was the rather out of place rant against trade unions by Harry! I think Trade Unions do a lot of good for employees, and I think the abuses of employees I've heard about in America where they can't have trade unions are shocking. They don't always work, but I think they are fundamentally a good thing.
Anyway, back to the story which is the main issue after all. I think it's fantastic, although I'm a little surprised at how quickly Harry's grown emotionally, most 18 year olds aren't that rational! But it's interesting to see a world where Harry takes charge and organises everyone else... And I love the spell mongering theories. The one thing I miss is Mr and Mrs Granger - although this story started with the Granger defence they've hardly been in it for ages. Hope they come back into it later, and keep beating the Death Eaters - it's great to see muggles beating wizards!
Keep up the good work, thanks, Helen |
nennius
Wednesday 7th February 2007 21:59 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Loved the chapter. One explanation I always considered to resolve the small amount of teachers was the fact that we were only seeing things from Harry's point of view. My last year of school I changed to one which had 1200 students. The only teachers that ever had my attention were those that taught my classes. I wasn't even aware of the rest of the teachers. Given Harry's role as the chosen one it would be entirely feasible for Dumbledore to make sure that he was only taught by the very best of his teachers, the heads of the very departments. The Arithmancy professor, Muggle Studies, Ancient Runes, and Hooch are never mentioned in-conjunction with the head table so there could quite well be many other teachers present but never mentioned. |
Milds
Saturday 27th January 2007 10:14 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Hi.
Great story - I enjoy longer chapters, it makes for a better flow of the story, I think - although I'm sure you already realised this, and thats why it'd be like that.
On the topic of Christianity, which some people seem to be rather... Vehement about. Christianty is actually an important concept in the Harry Potter books, and I'm not entirely sure how some people seem to forget this. I'm fine with religion in stories, as long as the belief never reaches the stage where every second paragraph is shameless preaching of the religion. I myself am an Atheist, but I can still read and enjoy the books - and the fanfiction detailed enough to include the concept of Chritianity realistically, although I've only managed to find afew - regardless of the religious concepts involved. I really don't understand why some people fuss about these things.
Anyway, back to the review
The update time is good - better than some other stories I'm reading, actually, and most of those stories have much shorter chapters. The characters are well thought out, interacting in the ways I can see them doing - under those circumstances. Their interactions with Author made characters also fit in with the scheme, which most stories don't. It's generally a well written, well thought out and well beta'd (Points for Kokopelli, one of the best Beta's I've seen the products of).
Keep writing and having fun - that applies to the reviewers aswell, even the odd cranky one
Milds. |
Milds
Saturday 27th January 2007 09:56 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Hi.
Great story - I enjoy longer chapters, it makes for a better flow of the story, I think - although I'm sure you already realised this, and thats why it'd be like that.
On the topic of Christianity, which some people seem to be rather... Vehement about. Christianty is actually an important concept in the Harry Potter books, and I'm not entirely sure how some people seem to forget this. I'm fine with religion in stories, as long as the belief never reaches the stage where every second paragraph is shameless preaching of the religion. I myself am an Atheist, but I can still read and enjoy the books - and the fanfiction detailed enough to include the concept of Chritianity realistically, although I've only managed to find afew - regardless of the religious concepts involved. I really don't understand why some people fuss about these things.
Anyway, back to the review
The update time is good - better than some other stories I'm reading, actually, and most of those stories have much shorter chapters. The characters are well thought out, interacting in the ways I can see them doing - under those circumstances. Their interactions with Author made characters also fit in with the scheme, which most stories don't. It's generally a well written, well thought out and well beta'd (Points for Kokopelli, one of the best Beta's I've seen the products of).
Keep writing and having fun - that applies to the reviewers aswell, even the odd cranky one
Milds. |
Heather_Sinclair
Wednesday 17th January 2007 21:11 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Seeing as I've just discovered this story I hope you'll forgive me for not reviewing earlier chapters.
From the standpoint of religious apathy (I could care less what or who people worship as long as they don't try to shove it down my throat) I find your use of religious topic ... interesting...
That's not as bad as it sounds, really. I think it works well with the story and if it wasn't apparent I'd never know it was Christianity that was being used in topic as most religions use peaceful contemplation and prayer in their practices.
One note of mention: in your examples (well thought out, by the way) of JKR's inclusion of varying supernatural creatures, etc. the pentagram was originally used by paganists as a symbol of protection some thousands of years ago. It was only as of late (in the grand scheme of things) that it has garnered the negative conotation as being evil or satanic.
However your point is well made.
Good luck with future chapters and I will be reading!
Heather Sincalir |
graup_hagrid
Tuesday 16th January 2007 18:36 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I quite enjoyed your story. It is very detailed and precise.
I am hoping you will circle back to some of the things you started, like Winky and new dress shop (Clarinda, was it?).
I enjoy your writing style as well. You have so many ideas, and they all come through and support your story. This DD is a much different man than man other fics, and I like the distinction.
I look forward to new additions to your story.
Thanks for sharing it. |
King of Pain
Tuesday 16th January 2007 16:20 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
First off, I confess I was pretty ticked off when you abandoned this story over at the Quill-I kept checking your LJ page and it too seemed to have went inactive.
After reading your comments here about why you left though, I can understand. I haven't encountered any secularism there personally, but then again, I basically am a lurker who reads alot. I applaud your efforts to incorporate Christian beliefs into this story.
I was so pleased to have been able to read several new chapters(and a few old ones too, just to make sure I was familiar with everything again.) Harry has definately matured and has a sharp edge to his persona when it comes to confronting the enemy. I hope you are making regular progress here, so I took the time to actually register and mark your story;-) I really liked where Molly went introspective about just what was at stake and what might need to be done too.
I would agree with a few of the other posters about how much detail you go into, it borders on overkill at times(but I had much rather have that than a thin plot with no detail). Grat story though, and I am looking forward to seeing it through. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 16th January 2007 14:53 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
A bit slow at the start, but very well-done at the end. Harry handled the vampires very nicely.
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fraupapst
Tuesday 16th January 2007 07:20 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
You've got to be kidding. You're shipping Filch and McGonagall and people flame you because you include religion.
Don't let it bother you. I don't share your religious belief, but it's your story and it's one of the things that make it special. I like it.
It doesn't come across as preaching imo. |
Hollu
Monday 15th January 2007 21:03 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I really appreciate what you've done with your story. I understand that to write a truly good fanfiction takes a lot of effort on the parts of many people. Anyone can write fanfiction; but not just anyone can write good fanfiction. As I've said before, the detail you provide and the energy you put forth is nothing short of amazing and enjoyable to read.
On a note about your author's note:
I think that people who flame an author for putting their beliefs into a story are...well....I'm not really sure how to say what I want to say without resorting to crude language. I thought that we live in a time when free expression is allowed and that there is such a thing as freedom of speech. I guess some people don't fully grasp that concept, or they just don't think it applies to everyone. People tend to comment before knowing much about what they are commenting on. It's a large case of "typing" before you think. So I will say that I appreciate what you are saying and writing about because I agree with you. Maybe this isn't the place to say that, but there, it's said.
Also to the Beta that left the second note:
I agree with you as well. If I don't like something I've read, I don't continue. I'll admit that in the past I may have left some reviews that were not "warm fuzzies", but I have tried to be as constructive and as rational as I could.
So thank you, to both of you, for putting things in such a way that will hopefully make others think a bit before commenting and maybe instead of flaming the author, they could start a discussion, a civil discussion, without getting all heated up over this issue.
Until next time,
Hollu |
amamama
Monday 15th January 2007 14:08 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter. Fudge and his cronies really are the worst, I so hope you'll find a permanent solution to that problem eventually. For the sake of the story I guess it might take a while? Incompetent fools like these are just too nice to have to make a point, and I guess it feels good to send a kick at RL adminiatrations by way of Fudge.
Harry's gambling and winning the peace treaty with the vampires was an incredible read. Guess they understood that Harry goes for what's right, the way he protected them. So - who gets to keep the table leg that Baron Ratner impaled himself on? The way your vampires reson, it should be a most prized item now...
I love all the small tidbits that shows Harry's compassion, which is huge. His care for others, like the way he provided picknic hampers and packed meals for his fellow travellers. And his contact with Ginny. They will indeed be a force to reckon with in the years that come...
When did there ever become too much religion in this story? Society is stuffed to the gills with religion, and people don't accept in in fanfiction? It's not like you're making Harry some kind of rabid fundamentalist! He's a guy who's balancing a lot in his life, and without religion or spirituality I'd say he'd be a nutcase. Every person, especially a warrior like Harry, needs a means to find inner peace. Father William is just wonderful, and just the kind I wish I'd had contact with while growing up.
Thanks for sharing theis wonderful story with us all. I kept finding small misspellings throughout, though not too many and not too serious. I do guess, however, that there should be advance and not advanced here: "..,you be given your writing assignments with plenty of advanced notice." Even if Dumbledore heavily favoured Harry above his other students, I doubt he's ask his teachers to help Harry with advanced notices. Rather, that he gets advance notice.
Once again, thanks a bunch - I surely look forward to the next chapter.
Cheers!
Berte |
kiddo
Monday 15th January 2007 12:04 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I wanted to thank you for this interesting and good written story. I also want to reply to your Note. I agree with you on the point that there is religion per se in Harry Potter and its your right to write the story you want to write it, including as much cristian religion as you want. Now I must admit that I'm not so keen on that particular subject in HP, but it's more because I think, that while there is religion in HP, there's no cristian religion and because of that it strikes me as something that doesn't fit in. But it's the same for people who start writing HP as a descedant of the druids or something. These stories can still be well written and I will read most of them anyways, because I think that this is a minor point. The story might be better (for me) without the references to cristian religion, but it's a very good story as it is.
This said, I hope I've managed to make it clear that I like your story, agree on your right to put as much cristianity in it as you want. Just forget everything I wrote and feel encouraged to keep writing the way you wrote! |
jgkitarel
Monday 15th January 2007 10:57 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
You are writing this very well, and I can just imagine the backlash from Fudge on this one. Something tells me that Harry is going to lose what little remaining patience he has with that man and stomp down, hard.
I am just waiting for that little confrontation.
I like how you figure in the political side of war the way you do. While a number of fics that deal seriously with the war do so as well, you add whole dimensions by factoring in other things, most notably, Harry's spell mongering.
You just may have made a new branch for writer's to explore here.
Anyway, OT here for a bit, what has so many people's panties in a bunch about factoring in religion? I have no problem with it, and if others do, well, it's their loss. I'm not particularly religious, but I have had reason to consult a Chaplain on a few spiritual matters on more than one occasion.
Frankly, I see no reason why religion can't figure into the whole thing in some way, or even play a serious role. I know I have read a fic or two where Harry did receive advice from a priest on various things. I have received everything from sound economic advice (my bank account proves that) to how to cope with stress and deaths in my family something I have had become too familiar with in recent years.
*sigh*
Well, I'll get off of this train of thought before I go into a full blown rant.
As I said before. You do excellent work. I may not always agree with everything you put out, but it's your story, not mine.
Keep up the excellent work. |
amulder
Monday 15th January 2007 09:40 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Another most succulent and satisfying fully packed chapter. Thank-you very much.
I particularly like your author's note. Really. A lot.
Keep up the great work!
...art |
oldman
Sunday 14th January 2007 19:01 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Sorry, I forgot to review the actual chapter! I like it a lot. Lovely scene with the vampires and you certainly are building up a massive confrontation with fudge. Is he truly dark? The scene with Severus was interesting. You had Snape much more restrained than I expected, and Draco didn't get discussed. Is he still to come with Dumbledore? I was just a little bit swamped with the teaching/studying schedule details. No doubt you will refer to these in following chaps.
Oldman |
oldman
Sunday 14th January 2007 18:51 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I have no probs with your continuing to use Greek or Norse Indian or any other mythical animals. I would be unhappy for their gods to feature. I am interested in your attempt to bring things Christian into the story. You seem to have gone for a real faith option rather than sacred ceremonies or holy objects. This will, however, sometime require Harry/Ginny/Dumbledore? to excercise faith and for God/Jesus/HS to respond.
I like the way you have H and G slowly growing together in respect etc but please don't drag it out too long before they are a couple.
Oldman |
DeborahSu
Sunday 14th January 2007 14:50 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
You're kidding, right? People are complaining about religion in the story? LOL!!! How could Sirius be Harry's godfather without religion? Duh.
Anyway, great chapter! Harry pulled it off with great finesse, though I would have loved to have seen Fudge get bitten ... ;-)
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TJM
Sunday 14th January 2007 14:49 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
This is the first time I've ever written a review, but I felt that I should let you know that I agree with your points in the author's note. Thanks for standing up for your right to include your own beliefs in your fic. I honestly can't see why anyone would be offended by making your Harry a Christian one, whether or not the readers are. People get carried away with their own worldview, I guess. I've also noticed that JK Rowling also includes the traditionally Christian holidays of Christmas (NOT Yule or Winter Holiday) and Halloween (not Samhain). I also find it odd that we Christians are expected to be tolerant of any other religion (or lack thereof), but that there are people with different beliefs that feel completely justified in their lack of tolerance and courtesy toward Christians.
[stepping off soapbox]
I've very much enjoyed your story. Please keep it up.
The only point of critique I might have is that your story includes a whole lot of narrative compared to the amount of action. I'm not sure how you'd trim it down though, given your creative plot points and the depth of even minor characters. And you do make the narration and back story interesting.
Well done. I can't wait for the next update. |
Sssith
Sunday 14th January 2007 12:05 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I continue to be intrigued by your story and the direction it is heading. You're slowly developing the magical world into an interesting and dynamic place. It is nice to see more that just Britian.
If I have a complaint about the story it is the level of detail that you go into regarding how magic works. I'll grant you that we need some understanding so that the conflict between Spell Mongers and the more traditional approach makes sense. But at times you seem to revel in the details.
As for the religious aspect, I admit that I am at a loss as to why people might be complaining. There is no doubt that religion is part of the world and it would be rediculous to suppose that it wouldn't exist within the magic community. You're supposition that Harry would feel comfort from having faith is perfectly plausible.
Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks! |
lupinspup
Sunday 14th January 2007 11:23 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Yay! An update!! I've said it before and I'll say it again... I absolutely LOVE this story! You have my utmost respect for your creativity and the fact that you research things. I do not have the discipline.
And KUDOS to you for keeping your faith in here, and not giving in to the small-minded individuals who have problems with learning of other cultures and religions. It is becoming a problem in a country founded on the principles of the freedom to choose and the ability to worship our God without fear of judgement or worse.
Keep it up! I'm can't wait for the next update! |
CrabbyOldHobbit
Sunday 14th January 2007 02:13 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| I don't write reviews very often - mostly because I can never remember my password - but for you, and for this, I had to make the effort. Thank you for having the guts to write a frank, uncompromising story that doesn't kowtow to the PC secularists that overrun the fandom. It is refreshing to read consistently good fiction by somebody who hasn't been conditioned to cringe and squirm whenever somebody says "God" - you are a rare and courageous breed, not only in the fandom, but in our society in general. Again, it has been a distinct pleasure, and I eagerly anticipate your next offering. |
wandwavingwannabe
Saturday 13th January 2007 19:05 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Ok since I have raved to you on how outstanding you have done with this story in other chapters I will now comment on your author's note.
I have actually read "The Key to Harry Potter" which in almost ever page of that book links the Harry Potter books up to Goblet to Christianity so you are right in doing so. I suggest that if anyone wants to "flame you" or yell or complain or anything of the sort at you.
You, yourself didn't introduce Christian themes or any other religious themes into your story. You are just writing a WONDERFUL fanfic based off a series of truely AWSOME books that already had those certain themes in them.
I will give a huge CONGRATULATIONS to you for a fanfic well written and that has been keeping me on the edge of my seat as I read the chapters when they come out.
WandWavingWannaBe |
lupinesithlord
Saturday 13th January 2007 18:31 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I have been reading this story along time...I first found it either on sugarquill or
on well a site I don't even remember the name of...but I fell in love with this work. I've been bummed out while waiting for the next chapter, and ecstatic when one comes out. please keep them coming, as timely as possible...
looking forward to chapter 14 already... |
Sunshine_108
Saturday 13th January 2007 16:21 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Hi, I've just got to say that I really enjoy this story! Keep it up! |
Grandma Kate
Saturday 13th January 2007 10:12 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Indeed, I can but echo the earlier reviewers. I really think your references to Harry's faith are very appropriate in context. And I will follow Kokopelli anywhere.
Ah, this was another tightly packed chapter with so much going on. I giggled a bit at Harry and the hair lengthening and the styling to show off his scar. But I don't argue with success. Poor foolish Fudge. He needs to "get a clue".
I am patiently waiting for Harry and Ginny fluff. |
unlfan03
Saturday 13th January 2007 09:15 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| So you been getting flamed for using religion? Well let me be one of those who says I like your use of religion. Most authors when they do use Christianity as part of their stories make it so that it is a bunch of crazy fundalmentalists like Farrwell and those people who want to ban Harry Potter in schools. They forget that it is a religion that has been around for over 2000 years and most people aren't nuts and want to go around killing anyone who doesn't agree with them. Anyway I love the story, it makes me smile when I see a new chapter update because I know it is a good day to read fanfiction. Keep up the good work. |
Spark Soliton
Saturday 13th January 2007 08:39 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
First a comment with regards to the author/beta note.
I have not considered your story particularily religious, neither do I think that about the original (canon) books either. If it hadn't been pointed out to me by the note, I wouldn't have thought of it. I enjoy your stories (and those of the cranky Beta extraordinaire) due to the multi-faceted aspects of them. Young Mr Potter is on the brink of being in a full-blown war. He has already been thrown into skirmishes where people have died due to his actions - regardless of his personal choice. Is it then so strange than he is questioning his personal vaues, worries about moral and ethics and seeks guidance in the religious community or from other people with similar experiences? No, I don't think so - in fact, most soldiers and law enforcement officers do exactly the same and what is Harry if not almost that? if someone flames you for that, it only shows how narrow-minded they are and come out worse for it. The fact that your story shows an unusually deep insight into how Harry's mind probably works, it certainly feels a bit more believable than some of JKR's depictions of him.
Now, the review.
I do love a bit off Fudge-bashing, not as tasty as toffee-bashing, but it gives a longer lasting feeling of rightfull bliss and this Fudge-bashing was excellent!!! Also, I think the depiction of Albus in this chapter was incredible - finally perhaps we can now start to understand why he acts the wast he does - brilliant. I also love the Harry and Ginny interaction- he so hasn't cottoned on that he has fallen for her and she doesn't dare to believe it either all though Colin, Luna and Hermione seems to have understood it, very gently and subtly written. I long to beat Snape over the head with a fake wand - he is so gaaaaahhh - frustrating!
I can't see Hagrid being without a wand for long - when is Harry going to get one for him?
All in all a lovely chapter, brilliant stortytelling! |
HPphoenix
Saturday 13th January 2007 08:24 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| I just want to say I think your story is fantastic. Out of all the stories I've read so far, yours is honestly the greatest. I love how you explain so many things in HP that other authors just ignore (like why Dumbledore left Harry to be mistreated by the Dursleys all those years.) And the fact that you incorporate Christianity into it is amazing. You're an inspiration, so please keep up the good work. |
butchlutz
Saturday 13th January 2007 07:53 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I love this story---my only complaint is you don't update faster....but I understand how and when the muse hits
am also following the parallel story over at fanfiction.net |
targetdummy
Saturday 13th January 2007 05:42 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I'm another one who doesn't review (shame on me) but I'd like to add my two pennies to this one. I always enjoy stories where Harry finds a Refuge in religion (be it Christianity or any other) because it seems like such a simple logical part of his growing-up. With all of the horror he's seen, I think religion would be a huge source of comfort for him - as it is for many through dark times - and that he would be strongly drawn towards this. I'm not Christian and I don't believe in saviours but if you can write it well (and you are doing) then go with it as much as you like.
I suppose I should say at this point - love the story, particularly some of your digressions into the more obscure aspects of Harry's magical musings. An interesting development is a more 'politically' aware Harry who is willing to take the front seat in the broader conflict. Not the way i see it going personally, but feasible and highly entertaining all the same
Finally, thanks for the author's and beta's notes, for making me stop and see, and poking me into (hopefully) writing a few more reviews |
murgel
Saturday 13th January 2007 05:31 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I simply love it. The wait for the next one will be WAY to long, even if you post tomorrow.
This is brilliant work, in my opinion even better then JKRs. |
Sheyana
Saturday 13th January 2007 00:29 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I just had to review after those author/ beta notes! A great chapter once again. I was really excited to see it up this morening and, having to leave for work half way through the chapter meant I could look forward to it for when I got home.
Can I just say that I love the way Christianity is incorporated into your stories and Harry Potter? The only reason I could see for complaint is if it completely changed the style and feel of a story, making it un-harry potter-ish. Since it hasn't done this in any of the stories that I've read, I've been greatly enjoying the element of Christianity added to the Fanfiction.
Could I have that list of authors and where they post so I can have a look at their stories and hopefully enjoy them. I have already read most Kokopelli and your work though. I'm not sure how these reviews work...but you can get stuff to me at sheyana@gmail.com
Thanks, and update soon
~Shey |
nennius
Friday 12th January 2007 23:52 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Another great chapter. I was surprised however by your note at the end and am amazed that people can complain about the religious content because I have always thought that JKR has loaded her book with religious concepts without stating it openly. After all if the final book lives up to the way she has built the plot then love is going to conquer the greatest evil. Can you get anymore Christian than that? And I'm not even a Christian myself! |
M. R. Moore
Friday 12th January 2007 22:58 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Great chapter... Though as one that tends to be a diction-nazi I will admit that I felt some of the scenes could have been worded differently, but wording is such a personal preferance that... Well, I think you know what I'm getting at...
Personally, I find your additions of Religion to the story refreshing... I'm not sure where I'm trying to take this... It's been less than a month since I accepted Christ into my life... Though it was a long process of questioning and exploring what I felt was right and was needed for me, I supose I was afraid of making the snap decisions I tend to... Even so I know from experiance that what you have Harry saying about reading Scripture rings true for myself as well...
If there are any stories you can recommend that, as Kokopelli put it, "try to accurately incorporate elements of Christianity into their tales" I would be very appreciative.
On a side note, I wish you updated your FanFicAuthor's page more often... No offence to the creators of PhoenixSong, but I find FFA to have a much more 'user friendly setup' a my Computer Tech teacher would say. |
ohhhdear
Friday 12th January 2007 22:51 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
I'm deeply appreciative of the many and unashamed Christian references in your stories. These religious representatives present a positive, balanced stance and are a credit to the Name of Christ. Thank you for that!
And also thank you for such a superbly written tale! Though I do at times feel Harry has grown more mature and wise than even the Paladin experiences could allow. Still, great reading, and I do hope Ginny plays a greater part in his life. |
J.R. Lewis
Friday 12th January 2007 20:14 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Go for it in any way you feel. This was great! Let the naysayers go fly a kite ... or say a prayer. I probably should give some comments on the chapter, but lets just say that I liked it for the most part. |
jedge1
Friday 12th January 2007 19:57 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| That's a very interesting rant there. I've got to admit it's rather sad that people can't just enjoy a well written story. Which is exactly what this is. Personally, I'm a Druid, have been for more than 20 years, I don't care what you put in here so long as it makes sense. Again, good job! |
croneus
Friday 12th January 2007 17:49 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
| Hi, I don't review much as you can see. But I feel you are right, what you said in the Author's Note and for some people to flame you for it is wrong. If they don't like it then they don't have to read it, it not like someone is holding a gun at there head and forceing them to read. A calm review stating that they would not care to see such things is they need and then stop reading it... and if they still read it then the only one to blame is them self, they shouldn't think that you should change your wrighting stile just for a few people. |
Milarqui
Friday 12th January 2007 16:33 | “Great Scott, Potter, This is War!” |
Great chapter! It was incredible to see how incredibly powerful can Harry be when he wants, and how can he give Fudge a good kick on his (metaphorically talking, that's clear; please, make it come literal!).
All the talk with Count Kldonovitch makes me wonder: who would be the most out-of-character if he met someone who hates vampires (namely Umbridge)? I'd bet that, if we restrict to topics, the Count would be more respectful and nice than Umbridge would ever be able in her life. |
