DanAngelus
Sunday 15th July 2007 16:39 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| hmm just finished reading HBP again before Friday and I think that this is a good start and will hopefully keep me occupied until then |
myketje
Monday 25th June 2007 08:02 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
LOVE IT! (that says enough, no :d)
waiting for the next chapter... and I'm sure i'll love it too!!
kiss kiss
me |
sexysel
Wednesday 6th June 2007 04:30 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
|
critmo
Thursday 26th April 2007 08:16 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Hm, I'm not really certain that Molly Weasley would be likely to agree that easily. Also, an eerie echo there, with Ginny saying that Zabini's existence was enough. Off to read more. |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 12:31 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| It's always a struggle to get the characters to behave in the way JKR would do, but I probably wrote her giving in to make my life easier ;-) |
Patches
Tuesday 27th March 2007 08:58 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| I like the way you are setting this up. I thought that Ginny kissing Harry was a good touch. It impacted Harry and also let him know that she was not happy with him at the same time. I look forward to more of your story. p |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 11:23 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thanks! That was what I hoped to do with that kiss so I'm glad it worked. |
Patches
Tuesday 13th March 2007 04:25 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| This was good. It described a plausible "last trip home" for Harry and Hermione and Ron. I liked Ginny on the train and at the station. She is a little spit fire! The Durseley's reaction was expected. I'm sure all the confrontations are not over. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. p |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 11:14 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. We don't normally get the train ride home but I'm hoping with do with DH |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 8th February 2007 19:04 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Love the kiss. And I wonder if those books were made by there house elves. It sure sounded like it. And Dudley Dudley Dudley. You will never get someone like Ginny like that. |
| Monday 5th March 2007 09:47 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| I think they were written by house elves... who better? You're right, Dudley's got NO chance! |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 30th January 2007 14:03 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
Nice start.
With Ginny kissing Harry like that I wonder if he'll keep her away for very long
I like the complaining book.
|
| Wednesday 31st January 2007 11:04 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| hehe, thanks. You're in for quite a wait on Ginny, though. ;-) |
sunnychristian
Monday 29th January 2007 13:12 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Wow, this is really, really good! Harry's emotions and the conversations are all very realistic and well-portrayed. Great job! Best wishes, Sunny http://www.sunnychristian.com |
| Monday 29th January 2007 13:29 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I aim to keep it real so I'm glad I'm succeeding. :-) Thanks for the review! |
Kamalia
Sunday 28th January 2007 19:47 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Well, my appetite has been whet. When is update the second? Soon, I hope... |
| Monday 29th January 2007 06:51 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| I saw this and then got a note from my beta that's she'd updated. She's looking at two chapters a week, or so. |
cckeimig
Friday 26th January 2007 10:42 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame |
| Good start. I look forward to reading more. |
| Friday 26th January 2007 21:08 | Harry Potter and the Final Flame (Author Response) |
| Thanks, my beta says she'll post more soon. :-) |
