saulick
Wednesday 7th October 2009 15:06 | Time's Winged Chariot |
Excellent, most excellent! When do we get the rest??
I'll say please!! |
lilyjamesfan
Monday 31st March 2008 19:05 | Time's Winged Chariot |
| This is really good you should right more. |
chiantiqueen
Friday 28th December 2007 09:48 | Time's Winged Chariot |
| I really really hope you write a sequel to this! I've been saying it all along but I'll happily say it again this story is awesome! I love James and Lily fics and this is one of the best I've read! |
| Friday 28th December 2007 10:09 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
Thanks for all your reviews - you've had a busy day! I do think that James and Lily must have been quite mature 17 year olds - partly because of the war, and partly because we know they marry so young. That's what I wanted to show in this story: a plausible progression from the relationship they had when they were 15 to where they must have been by the time they were 18 and 19.
I'm not sure that there'll ever be the projected sequel. I'm writing other things now and I never seemed to have the inspiration for it. I do have two other J/L stories you might enjoy: Love's Long Day and Long Love's Day, both here at PS. They're set on Valentine's Day the year before HWBWEAT. |
everylittlething
Monday 12th November 2007 19:01 | Time's Winged Chariot |
ah lovely... i really enjoyed this one too!
I'm looking forward to the third one in the series! |
| Friday 16th November 2007 19:49 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm not sure that the third one is ever going to be written. I just can't quite find a way into it. But you never know! |
bratatattack5
Friday 4th May 2007 16:28 | Time's Winged Chariot |
You have to keep writing are you going to write a follow up storie?Please do!!!!!!!!!I have to know what happens!!!!
Brat |
| Friday 4th May 2007 19:03 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
Well, um, James and Lily get married and a couple of years later they have a baby called Harry...
I don't know when or if I'll get round to the third part of this, sorry. But I'm glad you liked it. |
Evelyn
Tuesday 6th March 2007 10:17 | Time's Winged Chariot |
Ah... the jeweller's shop. Nice name.
I loved the Pride and Prejudice parallels, and the rest of the story, too - of course! I'll say it again: the way you write JK's characters makes them come alive, they're like real people with all their virtues and faults.
I'll be waiting for the third part, now that I've finished reading all your stuff. Pity. |
| Tuesday 6th March 2007 17:38 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
Glad you liked it. I don't seem to have any problem writing characters with flaws!
The next chapter of The Squib is with my beta and I'll try to keep updating that a bit more regularly than I have recently.
There are also a few bits and pieces on my LJ that you might enjoy. girlyswot.livejournal.com if you're interested.
Thanks for being such a constant and encouraging reviewer. And you never know, one day I might write that third part! |
Felix
Friday 23rd February 2007 02:32 | Time's Winged Chariot |
| Is there a sequel to this absoloutely wonderful and well written story? |
| Friday 23rd February 2007 06:48 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| Not yet. It's possible that there may be in the future, but not any time very soon. Sorry. I'm glad you enjoyed this one though (did you also check out the prequel 'Had we but world enough and time' and the Valentine's oneshot, 'Long Love's Day'? They might keep you going for a bit! |
Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 20th February 2007 04:10 | Time's Winged Chariot |
I'm reviewing for the entire story.
It's wonderful.
But, oh, I just wish it wasnt so short. It's so unbearably short. I'd love to read a story like this, and have it so long I get to read on and on and on and on.... *sigh* Some things are just too good to last.
Brilliant story. But again, way too short.
So looking forward to a sequel. |
| Tuesday 20th February 2007 05:37 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much. Did you read the story that comes before this in the series - Had we but world enough and time? I don't know when I'll get to the sequel, I'm afraid. I'm glad you enjoyed reading and thanks for leaving a review. |
DaFalcon
Sunday 18th February 2007 16:33 | Time's Winged Chariot |
This was a very wonderful Lily and James story. You did an excellent job pulling me into your LJ universe. I loved how they grew in love with one another. Even in the beginning stages of war, they were able to find love, understanding, and hope. So wonderful.
So, are you going to write a part three? I saw where you said you would but I'm not sure if you are or not. I think if you did, it would be even more great than what you've already produced. I see the progression in your writing. Great job!
Keep up the good work
d |
| Sunday 18th February 2007 16:47 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
Thank you so much for reading right through to the end - I'm glad you liked my James and Lily. I'm pretty fond of them too!
I'm not sure about part three. It was originally planned to take them through to their wedding. I'm not going to write baby Harry or Oct 31st. But just at the moment I want to write the parallel to Long Love's Day and really get to grips with The Squib, which needs some serious plot untangling! Maybe when I've got a bit more time - I do enjoy writing L/J, so don't give up hope.
And thanks for all your encouragement. I'm so glad you can see development in my writing - that makes it all worthwhile. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 7th February 2007 11:37 | Time's Winged Chariot |
What a counterpoint to such a sweet engagement
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| Thursday 8th February 2007 05:35 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! |
Kamalia
Friday 2nd February 2007 22:07 | Time's Winged Chariot |
Aww...I love the bittersweetness we got this time. I can\'t think of much else except to congradulate you on finishing part two! I really can\'t wait for part three to show up; it should surpass even this segment, I\'m sure! So get crackin on that last section...I\'m going to miss these regular updates!
Again, wonderful! Keep up the fine writing. You do Lily/James so well. You can capture their hope for the future and happiness without putting in all the darkness and foreshadowing of their gruesome ends... Very impressive! |
| Saturday 3rd February 2007 20:19 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
Thanks so much for your encouraging comments. I'm so glad you like my Lily and James. I don't think that they would have had any sense of doom at this stage of their lives and I wanted to try and tell their story from their point of view as normal teenagers, growing up and falling in love.
I don't know when or if the next part will come, but I hope you'll keep reading my other stories. |
Trelawney2213
Friday 2nd February 2007 13:49 | Time's Winged Chariot |
| How amazingly fitting the Pride and Prejudice reference is. It has been a pleasure reading these first two sections of this piece. I hope I get to see a third. Very well done, girlyswot! |
| Saturday 3rd February 2007 20:19 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for all your time and help with these stories. |
jessy
Friday 2nd February 2007 10:56 | Time's Winged Chariot |
wow!the ring was awsome!i am really looking forward to your next chapter
the war and stuff........ |
| Saturday 3rd February 2007 20:20 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
| Oh, and thanks for taking the time to review. |
Grandma Kate
Friday 2nd February 2007 04:48 | Time's Winged Chariot |
I loved this chapter but how could I not with James doing his Mr Darcy bit? Lily's ring sounds spectacular.
I await another segment of their story. Just because we know the journey's end doesn't mean we can't enjoy what happens on the way there. |
| Friday 2nd February 2007 05:54 | Time's Winged Chariot (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed the P&P reference. And I loved writing the section in the jeweller's. There is a small jewellery shop in my home town called M. Orzel's on which this one is (loosely!) based.
I don't know when or if I'll write part three. The plan was never to get to 'journey's end' but just to their wedding day - I can't write the sort of action needed for October 31st and I don't specially want to write Harry as a baby. I'll leave that for you! |
