majolie
Sunday 14th December 2008 20:04 | Delapidated Daisies |
| This was hilarious and sweet. Stumbled across it looking for some pre-OOTP stories to read as I just finished re-reading GoF. Anyway, loved this very much. |
| Sunday 14th December 2008 23:27 | Delapidated Daisies (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 16:49 | Delapidated Daisies |
cute story!!! Although i think that if i were harry that i would be thinking about ginny but then again he would probably look for any excuse to not think about her... and you do have to admit... it was pretty funny :p
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Arnel
Thursday 14th February 2008 08:08 | Delapidated Daisies |
| Even a year after this was written, I enjoyed reading this darling little story. You've captured Ron's lack of self-confidence perfectly and I love the fact that he hid his efforts from both Harry and Hermione. Hermione's reaction to Ron's first offering is classic Hermione which sets up the rest of this story perfectly. As for Harry, well, he needs to learn a little respect for his friends' growing relationship. Well done. Thanks for making me smile. |
gymnastgal19
Friday 16th November 2007 20:07 | Delapidated Daisies |
hahaha that was so cute I loved how ron trying to be romantic got it turned into a yelling match :p
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Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 06:13 | Delapidated Daisies |
Awwwwwwwwwwww
This is so sweet.
Her angry rant was cut short by the presence of the most pathetic, weakest, dilapidated daisy Hermione had ever seen. Its petals were weeping, the core was brown, and the whole thing was sagging, with only Ron's hand keeping it from wilting in half. But when she looked up at Ron, who was biting his lip, still holding out the flower, and nervously making eye contact, she had no doubt in her mind that this was the most beautiful flower in the world. I love this paragraph! That's just so sweet. I totally love that flower
And Harry's reaction is helarious.
GREAT STORY
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Narumi
Thursday 15th February 2007 12:27 | Delapidated Daisies |
| AWW that was really cute! |
jessy
Monday 12th February 2007 10:00 | Delapidated Daisies |
awwwwwww! that was so sweet!
what about harry?didnt he want a valentine....?
it was brilliant! |
cckeimig
Thursday 8th February 2007 22:17 | Delapidated Daisies |
| Oh, fun! This gave me such a case of the giggles! |
Grandma Kate
Thursday 8th February 2007 20:21 | Delapidated Daisies |
| Very sweet. I could imagine Ron and the far from perfect daisy. |
CrumpleHornedKiwi
Thursday 8th February 2007 18:27 | Delapidated Daisies |
| I love that Harry was getting caught in the cross fire - served him right! |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 8th February 2007 15:51 | Delapidated Daisies |
Very nice. I like how Ron couldn't do the spell correctly until he knew how Hermione felt.
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aurora luminis
Thursday 8th February 2007 12:23 | Delapidated Daisies |
| I thought you did an excellent job of staying with JKR's Ron...he couldn't make that bouquet until he knew she really wanted them/him. Her love was his 'Lucky Potion' ...true of us all. Really, it was very enjoyable. Winning isn't everything...doing a good job of it is more than enough reward. hope others find time to review. But I should talk......a.l. |
lantis222
Thursday 8th February 2007 11:20 | Delapidated Daisies |
| This is so Ron! I love it! What a perfect piece of pure fluff! Ron and Hermione, what are we going to do with them. Wonderful job! |
amamama
Thursday 8th February 2007 06:31 | Delapidated Daisies |
And the moment he got a truly positive incentive to conjure flowers, he managed! I guess that goes for all of us...
Thanks |
Astrid
Wednesday 7th February 2007 14:52 | Delapidated Daisies |
Pretty funny.
I don't know about the continuation of italics immediately after the letter. It feels off.
Cute story, though. |
