Praeceps09
Sunday 9th August 2009 01:03 | Echoes of Power |
| I will admit I agree with your betas you are Slytherin in your plots. However that makes the reading and rereading more interesting. Hoping for a new chapter soon. |
zeviv
Sunday 15th February 2009 23:22 | Echoes of Power |
| Regarding the author note, I like the subtle details of the plot and hope that you'll keep putting them in. This story has kept me up until 2am at times, so good job. (I'll say more to the most current chapter when I get there.) |
Worldmaker
Tuesday 19th August 2008 20:59 | Echoes of Power |
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I'm seriously hoping that *eventually* Harry stops being an arrogant *****. I want to finish the story, because I hate leaving them in the middle, but *********** is he unlikeably, and stories with total schmucks as the so-called "hero" are painful to read.
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GryffindorDragon
Sunday 15th April 2007 08:17 | Echoes of Power |
Another good fight scene. Glad to see Lucius taken down a notch or two.
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| Sunday 1st July 2007 21:01 | Echoes of Power (Author Response) |
| Lucius taken down, or the whole notch in the cane? Hmmm, fun variances of interpretation. English can be quite evil at times. Regardless, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. |
Patches
Sunday 15th April 2007 02:29 | Echoes of Power |
| This was a busy chapter. Ginny is spending a lot of time with Harry and his friends and acquaintances. That is good. Cyril and Harry really got into a mess with Lucius and his "friends'. That was interesting who the fack Filch and Draco were. It looks like Lucius blew it this time. Of course Harry got to explain again. I thought that was interesting when Harry tried to communicate with Fred and George. It showed a deffinite weakness in his "ring plan". They made it work though. Of course Fudge is going to mess with Harry's friends like Edgar and Remus and of course Crowley. I like the way Luna talked to Harry about his "Vampires, Werewolves and Goblin" friends. She really hit that nail on the head. I thought it was good when Ginny asked why Remus would be affected by the new ministry directive about dard creatures entering Hogwarts. I thought it was really good that Remus told her right out. Her response was excellent also. She put the blame on the curse not on Remus. I think he appreciated that. I'm sure Harry did also. I'm glad they found Filch and Mrs. Norris. That poor old cat must be beside herself. I know she annoys the kids but that is normal. The question is "who" put all those confundus charms on Filch and who obliviated him during the last year? I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. p |
| Sunday 1st July 2007 21:00 | Echoes of Power (Author Response) |
| Harry has a busy life, doesn't he just? How did Lucius blow it? Are you sure he was doing that under his own directive, and not at the behest of someone else? Even the good guys have to work within the limits of what they produce, regardless of how it might irk them at times. The right to privacy is a big deal, I'd say, and everyone needs to respect the boundaries. Filch and his cat, quite the pair, wouldn't you say? And yet, they have been hamstrung so far... |
cckeimig
Friday 13th April 2007 12:38 | Echoes of Power |
Too subtle? I don't know about that. I don't necessarily like to be bludgeoned with the obvious...too many fics are extremely predictable.
I may rant about Ginny's too-short fuse, but so what? I don't think you should give TOO much away, as I can see where some of this foreshadowing is going.
I've really been enjoying this fic so far and look forward to the next update (yeah, I know, give you a chance to write more...you posted 3 in two days, but a gal can wish, right?). :-) |
| Sunday 1st July 2007 20:58 | Echoes of Power (Author Response) |
| Well, maybe it's just the normal type of reader versus my beta team warning me about the normal type of reader? Really, if there were just a handful of people that really enjoyed the story, that would be enough for me. Predictable is fun. It means that I can lead people by the nose to what's predictable, and then sharply yank on that ring through their centerpiece. Aside from the mess and yelling, it lets them know that not everyone follows form just to follow form. Is that wrong of me? I hope not. You may have started reading during the big re-post and re-edit here at PS, so I'm sure you've noticed the pace has dropped off significantly. Sorry about that. With luck, it'll be picking up again soon. |
klubkane
Thursday 12th April 2007 16:18 | Echoes of Power |
| One of the best efforts I have read in a long time...keep up the work. |
| Sunday 1st July 2007 20:55 | Echoes of Power (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. |
