steven carnell
Sunday 18th May 2008 03:20 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Very nice, well wriitten story. 10/10. |
chiantiqueen
Monday 14th January 2008 05:50 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Laughing gas in the champagne, brilliant! Loved it! |
bookish327
Monday 22nd October 2007 19:41 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Fun story. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 10th October 2007 21:36 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| lol I love the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Darth_Flatus
Tuesday 31st July 2007 19:39 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| not as good as your other one... needed peanut butter. |
myketje
Monday 30th July 2007 08:07 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
I really liked it! This story deserved to be this week story.
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Sonicdale
Tuesday 17th July 2007 14:01 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
Nice.
It ended a bit ... um ... predictable, but a very satisfying predictable.
The twins saying "I say, Fred, " ... a bit too much Britspeak for me, but it oddly worked.
Loved Harry's hilarity. And that Mr. Weasley and he were losing it was priceless.
Good work. |
ginnysohma
Tuesday 17th July 2007 12:17 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| I love how Hermione was depicted, fretting over everything. And the laughing gas in the bubbly? Cute little touch. Made me laugh. Cheers! |
but3rcupbaby
Monday 16th July 2007 08:30 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Hi! In light of the problems with the contest, I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed your story! |
aurora luminis
Thursday 12th July 2007 10:31 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| I would not have believed someone could do something this good with Droobles Bubblegum and a little dentistry. It took courage to tackle that and you pulled it off. It makes for a nice stop to breath and remember life isn't all about success and all the other silly things we chase after. |
DailyProphetReporting
Wednesday 11th July 2007 02:57 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| I really enjoyed this. It's short and to the point, but everything you do really serves a nice purpose in giving this a structured plot and a hilarious finish. And I was especially impressed that you were able to take something so esoteric and come up with real, in-character comedy. Well done! |
Grandma Kate
Tuesday 10th July 2007 08:33 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| This was very humorous. I can just picture Gred and Forge giggling. |
DeborahSu
Monday 9th July 2007 16:17 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
ROFLOL!!!! I love the nitrous oxide champagne--and the outcome. Great job on a one-shot!
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lantis222
Monday 9th July 2007 16:08 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| That was brilliant. I really Really liked it. Great job! |
pyromain
Monday 9th July 2007 10:33 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| This is so cute, Really liked Fred and Georges idea to use laughing gas in the champagne quite original. |
ves.heill
Sunday 8th July 2007 09:40 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Very cute story! I can easily picture Hermione flipping out about the caterer. I'm surprised, though, that you didn't make any mention of the twins' birthday on April 1. |
ibelieveintruelove
Sunday 8th July 2007 02:29 | Harry Potter and the Bubbles of Doom |
| Hahaha aww thats great! Very cute |
