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Friday 19th October 2007 18:50 | The Squib | ahh! I'm such a horrible reviewer, I'm so excited to get to the next chapter I always forget my promise! I hope that was review worthy enough, obviously that all translates to: great story, must read more, no time to chat!
Thanks!
sherellyn | dogstar
Saturday 25th August 2007 06:57 | The Squib | Yay! I loved Ben in this chapter - what a hero. Raphael's description of what he'd like to do to Mackenzie was a bit much *shudder*
Another great chapter. This really is a wonderful story, Ros.
One of my favourite bits:
He went fast and low and, with the Disillusionment Charm cast, it took all her concentration to follow him. She’d never seen him like this before: fierce and determined and seemingly without fear as he focussed only on his goal.
Now that's Harry. *swoon* | | Saturday 25th August 2007 07:23 | The Squib (Author Response) | | It's funny - I never meant Harry to have such an important role in this story but he just kept unobtrusively sliding his way in. I was glad to have the chance to write him with such obvious echoes of his past as well as in his more normal adult life. | lantis222
Sunday 19th August 2007 11:28 | The Squib | | very good, I really liked this chapter. i can't wait for the next one where everything is finished up. You really do a good job and I've really enjoyed your writing. Great work. | | Sunday 19th August 2007 12:43 | The Squib (Author Response) | | Thank you so much. You've been such a faithful reviewer which has been a real encouragement to persevere with the story. | Grandma Kate
Saturday 18th August 2007 00:06 | The Squib | You write action scenes very well and manage to keep all the various threads in good order to move the plot along. It almost reads like a screen play.
And if you hadn't sent me the recipe for flapjacks, I'd wonder about Ginny leaving plates of pancakes for her guests to eat. | | Sunday 19th August 2007 12:44 | The Squib (Author Response) | Thanks, Kate. There are a lot of short scenes in this chapter which I hope adds to the feeling of urgency. I wanted to keep chopping between Ben and the others.
I had to send Gerry the flapjack recipe after this chapter too! |
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