J-TGriffy
Sunday 11th March 2012 17:11 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
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clare
Tuesday 8th December 2009 22:46 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Oh harry as the over protective father - perfect and written so well. |
| Tuesday 1st January 2002 05:43 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 20th September 2008 22:17 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
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| Sunday 21st September 2008 05:47 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
blue_and_white_witch
Sunday 31st August 2008 09:29 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| This is excatly how I image Harry's family and your Lily is delightful, its such a refreshing change to read stories abou her and not AS too. |
| Tuesday 2nd September 2008 06:32 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Little Lily is a lot of fun to write. |
chiantiqueen
Tuesday 15th January 2008 09:42 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Love it! The characters are just as I imagine them. Great job!! |
| Wednesday 16th January 2008 09:48 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
majolie
Wednesday 9th January 2008 17:30 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
Oh, that killed me. I am not looking forward to my daughter getting to that age. Really good story. I loved the way Harry and Ginny are torn between wishing their children out of the way, and wishing they would never leave. I feel pulled both ways every day myself and you captured that feeling perfectly. Aside from a few typos, you write very well, and I'm going to go read the rest of your stuff.
Thanks! |
| Saturday 12th January 2008 16:11 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
Oh, that killed me. I am not looking forward to my daughter getting to that age.
I have several friends that are thinking the same so I dare say you are in very good company. |
manavijain
Friday 30th November 2007 09:51 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
"But she's my baby."
hehe...oh my god...ur seriously the best author on phoenixsong...reeli.im nt kiddin...ur stories are GREAT!!!harry in im-the-protective-father-mode ...hehe...ginny totally cool bout it...da kids are amzing...ur a gr8 gr8 author..plz keep on riting more...ny more pieces cuming up..lol.cheers |
| Sunday 9th December 2007 16:23 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Harry was/is (not sure which is the right to use) be over protective, especially towards his little girl. |
drummersgirl
Tuesday 27th November 2007 10:11 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| I normally don't read Post DH family stories, not cause they aren't good, but cause I have my own idea of how they are...but this one was really great. I can totally see the Potter household in this same way. Great story! |
| Sunday 9th December 2007 16:24 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
Thank you.
I don't normally write family stories either (this was a prompt from my yahoo group) but I have to say I really enjoyed writing it. |
Snowflake24
Monday 19th November 2007 10:25 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
I love all your work! Please keep writing.
You're the first person I have reviewed (im new) and i love reading your stories. So in short Thanx!
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| Monday 19th November 2007 14:34 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
I'm honoured to be your first review. Thank you so much.
As for keeping writing, well as I've mention at my yahoo group, I've got another one shot in the works and a multi chaptered piece. |
pyromain
Saturday 17th November 2007 05:06 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| loved it, harry all woried over his little girl. |
| Monday 19th November 2007 14:31 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| cheers |
Delfino
Wednesday 14th November 2007 16:48 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Cute! This was a very enjoyable read. Good job! |
| Monday 19th November 2007 14:30 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
sweetdreamer285
Tuesday 13th November 2007 13:50 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Great read, I enjoyed this so much! Thanks! |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 16:00 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
harry_ginnyfan
Tuesday 13th November 2007 13:30 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
Great story! Will there be another chapter? I hope so! Keep on writing!
Cheers! |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:59 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| No more chapters, but I am writing at the moment. |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 13th November 2007 09:44 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
oh no!
please write more!!!!!! please please please!
this is the best fanfic i have ever read, im serious!
oh, i loved every second... just everything!
the constant hints ginny kept dropping, the way you portrayed the kids, the mentions of the past and fred - how you managed to fit them in but not over-do them!
oh, it was so good!
i totally forgot that one day james, al and lily would be older than 12, 11 and 9! i loved how you charactised (is that a word?) them...
teehee! |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:58 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
thank you so much for your review, I'm honoured and really not sure I deserve it.
i totally forgot that one day james, al and lily would be older than 12, 11 and 9! i loved how you charactised (is that a word?) them...
Yes and they are such wonderful characters, it was a lot of fun building on the information the epilogue gave us. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 12th November 2007 21:09 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
HAHA! This is a cute story I love how harry gets overprotective of lily
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| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:56 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
The_Critic
Monday 12th November 2007 13:37 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| abrupt ending, don't you think? |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:55 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| I can see your point, however I view the ending as having room for people to use their imaginations and the next scene would really belong more on TBC than here, if there was one. |
brown_eyes
Monday 12th November 2007 12:42 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
Poor Harry, I guess its no fun to have your daughter grow up.
A very fun, enjoyable piece. |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:53 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
dcgirl
Monday 12th November 2007 08:17 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Poor Harry! His little girl is growing up on him. Great story! |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:51 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| thank you |
minervarocks
Monday 12th November 2007 07:42 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| I like this little glimpse into the future. I love the one-shots that provide ordinary days in Harry's life after Voldemort. Great job. |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:49 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Well JKR did show us that Harry does get a normal life that we can play with, and doesn't he deserve that normal life. |
lantis222
Monday 12th November 2007 07:29 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| Very cute, I liked it a lot. Well done! |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:48 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Cheers |
brios
Monday 12th November 2007 07:20 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| this story screams for a 2d chapter |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:47 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| No chapter two in the plans as of yet. |
Patches
Monday 12th November 2007 01:52 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| This is very well done. No father likes to think his little girl is growing up and "getting to know boys". Poor Harry has to let go and let his daughter grow up. It is part of life. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more stories like this. p |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:46 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| I know, and Harry really doesn't want to overthink this as telling your fathertends to be last on the list of things to do with a new boyfriend. |
parakletos
Monday 12th November 2007 01:11 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
A nice story - its is a father's nightmare and I have two teenage daughters.
One small point, its Aga if you are thinking about the cooker. |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:44 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
Cheers mate
Yes I guess having a daughter can be hard for a father. |
Grandma Kate
Sunday 11th November 2007 20:41 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| What a nice glimpse into life at the Potters. Your Ginny is delightful. |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:41 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Thanks, you know I always have a lot of fun writing Ginny. |
Trelawney2213
Sunday 11th November 2007 20:26 | Quality Quidditch Requirements |
| What a sweet characterization of Harry and the family he's always longed to have. Very nicely done. |
| Wednesday 14th November 2007 15:40 | Quality Quidditch Requirements (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate |
