DaniKay
Friday 12th June 2009 18:38 | Seventeen |
OMG LMAO! I completely LOVED this! It's soo amazing, on so many levels. It's hilarious (I couldn't believe that you had Harry shave his head! lol) It's so sad in parts (when Harry and Ginny said their real goodbyes) And it's so sweet (basically everything inbetween the sad and funny parts )
I really am upset that it's not longer, but, as it is, it's really brilliant. I've read all of your other stories, and I have to say sorry. Why? Because I haven't reviewed for every chapter of MoO part one and two. I normally review for every chapter on the stories I really like, but on yours, I was too excited to see the next chapters lol. Also, I think you're a brilliant writer, and I hope that you continue to write amazingly
Can't wait for the nexr MoOii chapter I'll review this time ^_^
Cheers for amazing stories,
DaniKay
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| Friday 12th June 2009 22:44 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
Thanks very much. I had a lot of fun writing Seventeen , so I'm glad to hear that you had fun reading it. I liked being able to fit some emotion and serious issues into what is basically a humorous story.
I can hardly complain if you don't review MoO because you're reading MoO, can I? I'm glad you're enjoying that, too. I hope to have the next chapter posted in a week or two.
Thanks! |
saulick
Thursday 29th January 2009 06:15 | Seventeen |
| A very good and fun story. Thanks for sharing it. |
| Friday 12th June 2009 22:41 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading. (And sorry for the very late reply.) |
AlwaysGinny
Wednesday 1st October 2008 14:31 | Seventeen |
GINNY 4EVA!!! |
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AlwaysGinny
Wednesday 1st October 2008 14:31 | Seventeen |
GINNY 4EVA!!! |
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AlwaysGinny
Wednesday 1st October 2008 14:31 | Seventeen |
GINNY 4EVA!!! |
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QuidditchLover
Monday 7th July 2008 23:20 | Seventeen |
| this was awesome! even though we already know what happened, i really enjoyed it. i like this version much better. but please tell me harry re-grew his hair! |
| Tuesday 8th July 2008 06:40 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Of course he did! Ginny would kill him if he didn't. Thanks for reading. |
bookish327
Monday 26th May 2008 20:07 | Seventeen |
| Very impressive work, as always. You put so much thought, planning, and detail into your stories. You are a real craftsman. Also, I love the humor and creative brilliance. Who would have pictured Harry as a bald, blond-goatee'ed ice cream vendor in a pink & white striped suit, with a bowler hat and white, heeled shoes? Few people could come up with something that humorous yet still anachronistic of our own Harry. You write Harry perfectly. He's very brave, smart, resourceful, and creative. Ginny was exactly right when she said that they knew no one else who was better suited to survive on his own. His childhood helped him with that quite a bit. However, despite all of these amazing qualities, he still stuttered a bit when Ginny pointed out his using the "arm around the back of the chair" move on her after she had kissed him in front of all of Gryffindor. So, you still kept Harry human and himself, even if he was a more adult, mature version of himself. Great job, as always. |
| Tuesday 27th May 2008 07:36 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| I'm very glad that you could see the 'old' Harry within the new version. That bit with the "arm maneuver" is one of my favorites - I can really picture Harry being hesitant about it with Ginny and later teasing Ron for doing it with Hermione. Thanks! |
the_critic
Wednesday 30th April 2008 18:17 | Seventeen |
| rofl. ROFL. LOL LOL LOL. Sequel. Now. NOW! SEQUEL? |
| Tuesday 27th May 2008 07:34 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| You never know, I guess. What would "Eighteen" look like? Thanks! |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 11th March 2008 17:11 | Seventeen |
i loved this story
nice and original and funny
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| Wednesday 12th March 2008 19:29 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much! |
The Boss
Tuesday 19th February 2008 05:30 | Seventeen |
Great title for a wonderful piece of fanfic!I liked how you worked on the trunk - specifically putting in a little house in it =] great job.
Only one question how come the ministry were still looking for Harry after the inital few days?Wouldnt they be a little suspicious that he might have left?
Thanks
The Boss |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:47 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
After a few days, it wasn't so much the Ministry as the Order. Regardless of the 'official' position about Harry, the Order of the Phoenix would keep looking for him. Can you imagine Molly letting them stop?
Thanks for reading! |
brios
Thursday 10th January 2008 17:33 | Seventeen |
| Very enjoyable to read. Thanks for taking the time for writing it for us. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:46 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading it. |
AriesGirl
Wednesday 9th January 2008 09:31 | Seventeen |
Mr. Ice Cream Man!!!
comical ,enjoyed your work of art thru fits of laughter.
Idea for you. Harry Potter Street Performer. I think you could pull it off. Hedwig could do tricks.
lol and many more
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| Monday 25th February 2008 13:45 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Ha! A street performer, that might be funny. No one would have to know it was real magic if he was careful. Thanks for reading! |
aharkins
Wednesday 9th January 2008 09:02 | Seventeen |
| I really enjoyed the story. Funny and non-violent. Exactly what i needed on a boring first day back at school. Keep writing - You're very good at it. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:43 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Thanks! It was great to write something lighter and almost completely non-confrontational. |
Mrs Black
Wednesday 9th January 2008 06:39 | Seventeen |
Brilliant! I would love to read more along the lines of this story.
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| Monday 25th February 2008 13:42 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
This was fun to write, so perhaps I'll try something similar someday. There's a lot of potential in the 'tone' of the AU . . . a lighter, friendlier version of the war, or at least the edges of the war. Clearly the fight with Voldemort is not light or friendly in the least. Anyway, who knows?
Thanks for reading! |
majolie
Tuesday 8th January 2008 19:35 | Seventeen |
This was FABULOUS. Who cares about AU - it was so entertaining and fun and romantic and right.
Well, I did have a little problem with a not-quite 16-year old girl being quite so suggestive with her undergarments ... I guess I am either showing my age, or feeling the worry that comes from having a daughter, even if she's only three.
I was able to let it go and just enjoy the ride though. I was able to actually picture Harry in his disguise - amazing!
You are a great writer - I love your stuff. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:40 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
I think you have a very valid point about Ginny's actions. In fact, I sortof intended them to be a bit too suggestive. The important question is why. Why would Ginny do that sort of thing, when at times it's obvious that it's partly just for show? What's the point? Why is the story titled "Seventeen"? The big clue, at least as I intended it, is at the very, very end of the story. If you'd like a full explanation, feel free to email me.
Beyond all that, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was great fun to write something a bit lighter than my norm, and that picture of Harry is what got me started in the first place.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
Anamorphius
Tuesday 8th January 2008 14:12 | Seventeen |
There's only one thing to say...
BRILLIANT!!! |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:34 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
girlspell
Tuesday 8th January 2008 13:23 | Seventeen |
Very clever, little story. Really so well written and heart felt.
I'm amazed at the details you put in. It seems that nothing was overlooked. I have read everything you've written at PS, and I think this little stand alone is one the best things you've ever written.
What I liked so much was the atmosphere you kept along with the pace of the story. It just never let up |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:33 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
Wow, such nice things you say. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Beyond anything else, I wanted it to be fun to read. And, of course, I was seriously tickled by the image of a bald Harry in a pink-striped suit selling ice cream. With that in mind, the rest of the 'atmosphere' just sortof happened naturally. It's not meaningless, but it still can't take itself too terribly seriously.
Thanks for reading! |
pyromain
Tuesday 8th January 2008 10:13 | Seventeen |
The details might have made the story AU but I really liked it. The idea of hidding thing in plain sight is always best and really works so the story has better "truth" feeling to it.
I have to thank you for this story I had a lovely time reading it and think it was briljant. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:31 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading! |
lantis222
Tuesday 8th January 2008 09:48 | Seventeen |
I laughed all the way through it. I really liked it. They idea of Harry as an ice cream vendor...
Well done. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:29 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Once I got that image in my head (with the pink, striped suit), I just had to write about it. I'm glad you liked it too. Thanks for reading! |
chiantiqueen
Tuesday 8th January 2008 04:16 | Seventeen |
| Wow, what a great story! The trunk is genius, I wish I had one! |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:27 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Wouldn't it be fun? Thanks for reading! |
Wolfric
Tuesday 8th January 2008 02:06 | Seventeen |
| This must be posted elsewhere or here previously because I have read it before; not that revisiting it is a bad thing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for writing. W. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:25 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| Yup, it's over on SIYE also. Thanks for re-reading. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 7th January 2008 23:48 | Seventeen |
wow!! very ingenious! I loved this story! im not surprsed though that no one recgonized harry though. that trank was a brilliant idea too.
i loved the part where bill said to harry that he couldnt believe that he could talk to kingsley like that and harry replied that he should try chatting with voldemort sometime. rofl!
i loved this story!!!
thanks for writting it!
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| Monday 25th February 2008 13:24 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Humor isn't usually my thing, but it sure was fun to play with this time. |
Arnel
Monday 7th January 2008 23:00 | Seventeen |
| What a delightful story to read just before bed! I'm feeling all fluffy inside because of the Harry/Ginny romance and the success of Harry's "trial run" with his disguise. I love the fact that Ginny kept leaving Harry little reminders of herself where he could easily find them. And I toast the success of Harry's disguise and wish just a little that he had been as daring as this in Book 7. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and a give it a hearty for your creativity. |
| Monday 25th February 2008 13:21 | Seventeen (Author Response) |
I am incredibly far behind on review responses. Oops!
I really enjoyed writing Harry as a daring character, and Ginny as a well-intentioned tease is just fun. I'm glad I was able to fluff up your life. Thanks! |
