kopfsalat2000
Sunday 28th June 2015 08:47 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
Nice
It's good to see Neville as a teacher, well done. |
Thorn
Tuesday 9th December 2008 14:43 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| is Luna Neville's wife?????!!!!!! |
joes12321
Thursday 31st July 2008 06:38 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
ahhh neville. there's no character in the books who grew more than him and for that, you have to love him.
the one thing struck me hard while reading this is that it seemed like neville has a little bit of dumbledore in him - and that is a really pleasant thought. |
rich.sanidad
Monday 19th May 2008 14:24 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Great fic! Your characterization of Neville is very well done, in my opinion. You show a logical maturity without losing the personality established in canon. You had free rein to do whatever you wanted on Teddy, but you kept him human and realistic. He's having a better orphan life that Harry did at that age, but he still has issues to deal with. I have no idea what the parameters of the original challenge were, but I think the fact that the story stands well on its own without needing any references to the challenge speaks well of your skill. |
Hot48cricket
Sunday 17th February 2008 11:37 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| This was nice, I really enjoyed it. |
Hot48cricket
Sunday 17th February 2008 11:37 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| This was nice, I really enjoyed it. |
Lizzie_Harrison
Saturday 16th February 2008 12:13 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Really good |
aharkins
Friday 15th February 2008 18:08 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| excellent story - Thanks for writing and sharing |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:37 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
Patches
Friday 15th February 2008 01:48 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| This was very well done. What a great gift for Neville to give to Remus son. It is really great that Teddy has a teacher who knew his father as well as Neville did. Remus was a great teacher and his example really helped his own son even though Remus wasn't there to help him himself. It just goes to show that people that live with adversity can become better because they have overcome the things they had to go through. Harry and Neville would be great examples to their children and their god-children. You have done a great job putting this piece together. Thank you for writing. I look forward to more of your stories. p |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:37 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. I had lots of fun exploring the similarities between Teddy and Neville, and highlighting the ways Remus was a mentor and inspiration for Neville. I really love Neville and enjoyed writing him. Thank you for the lovely detailed comments. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 13th February 2008 20:59 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
nice story! i never though of teddy being scared of that althought that does make sense... and you never read this kind of fanfic its a refreshing change
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| Friday 15th February 2008 20:33 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
mollyw4
Tuesday 12th February 2008 21:45 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Very nicely done. |
mollyw4
Tuesday 12th February 2008 21:45 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Very nicely done. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:31 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks. |
TreyFury97
Tuesday 12th February 2008 20:46 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
I like this ficlet. It was interesting seeing a Neville themed story, and him using his experiences with Teddy. I had never connected how much he and Teddy are alike, and I can see him and Teddy bonding in a special way that others might not realize. Great Job, and I hope to see more Post Hogwarts ficlets from you, because this one left me wanting more.
Trey |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:30 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I actually didn't see all the similarities between the two characters until I started writing. I'm glad you liked it. |
lantis222
Tuesday 12th February 2008 18:06 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
I'm speechless. This was wonderful. Neville is one of my all time favorite characters. I knew he was destined for great things. Although he is a destroyer of Horcuxes and every bit as much a hero as Harry, I do believe he has just accomplished one of his greatest works.
Well done, I hope you write more. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:25 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much! That is amazingly high praise, and I really appreciate it. |
majolie
Tuesday 12th February 2008 18:03 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
That was great. I really enjoyed seeing Neville taking on the role Professor Lupin played for him. They both had difficult childhood's and used them to help others ... and how fitting that the child Neville helps is Lupin's son.
Loved it. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:23 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you liked my take on Neville as a Professor so much. I really had fun exploring the impact Lupin had on his life, and the similarities between Neville and Teddy. |
Worldmaker
Tuesday 12th February 2008 17:53 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Excellent. Most excellent. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:12 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
brios
Tuesday 12th February 2008 16:49 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Aww, I love it, so sweet. I've always like Nevile as a character and I think you pictured him here beautifully as a caring teacher. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:06 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I've always thought Neville would make an excellent teacher. |
Gardengirl
Tuesday 12th February 2008 11:26 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Very nice! I love your compassionate, still slightly hesitant Neville. That Teddy should be somewhat afraid of his werewolf heritage is a very insightful thought, too. Neville's way of helping Teddy feel comfortable with him by means of their grandmothers is just SO Neville. And that Neville's desire to go detention-less until Christmas being in honor of his Gran's memory... really beautiful. Great job! |
| Friday 15th February 2008 20:01 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your kind comments. I'm really happy you enjoyed my story so much. I do love Neville, and I'm sure he is an excellent teacher and mentor. I had fun writing this. |
southatxchris
Tuesday 12th February 2008 10:54 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
outstanding work, bravo.
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| Friday 15th February 2008 19:58 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 12th February 2008 10:34 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
wow that was lush! i never imagined teddy being insecure and having those little problems but it really worked. and i love how neville became like lupin was with harry! i think he'd make a great mentor!
loved teddy too. can't get enough of stories about him, he's so adorable but mysterious! |
RIPHedwig
Tuesday 12th February 2008 10:34 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
wow that was lush! i never imagined teddy being insecure and having those little problems but it really worked. and i love how neville became like lupin was with harry! i think he'd make a great mentor!
loved teddy too. can't get enough of stories about him, he's so adorable but mysterious! |
| Friday 15th February 2008 19:57 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I'm glad you liked my story and my ideas. It was fun writing Teddy. |
tykegirl
Tuesday 12th February 2008 02:37 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| I really liked this. Follows on from Remus's own fears for Teddy. Well Done. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 19:55 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
skippy agogo
Tuesday 12th February 2008 00:25 | Detention With Professor Longbottom |
| Very well done! Just the right mix of humour, life and memories. |
| Friday 15th February 2008 19:53 | Detention With Professor Longbottom (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
