minxblades
Sunday 30th July 2017 18:04 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| more neville and rose |
spuffie77
Friday 27th March 2009 18:47 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| Great writing. the drama builds. Rose sees bad things coming. Draco is faking, he is scum. I hate to think what is store for our valiant group. The death eaters really need a severe whipping!!!! I will be glad to see the nasty vermin get what they deserve. I do like the way the group is being nice to Ti, and I know when Ti sees Draco's true colors they will be very close again. The relationships between our main characters are well written and I am greatly enjoing the interaction between all couples, especdially Neville and Rose at this point. Im thinking they will have true love. ))) Great job foreshadowing, building suspense, and great overall writing. I know I am missing a lot. but I'd have to write a book myself to say how much i enjoy your writing. Thanks!!!!! |
nightwing
Wednesday 24th September 2008 20:06 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| good chapter |
calleighpotter
Sunday 30th March 2008 17:15 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
awesome chapter
can't wait for the next one! |
calleighpotter
Monday 24th March 2008 12:18 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Hey, that was a really great story, so far. All of it was exactly as I imagined. Do you mind if I write a story about Ginny & Harry's children piggybacking iff of your retelling?
Calleigh |
calleighpotter
Monday 24th March 2008 12:18 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Hey, that was a really great story, so far. All of it was exactly as I imagined. Do you mind if I write a story about Ginny & Harry's children piggybacking iff of your retelling?
Calleigh |
| Friday 28th March 2008 05:42 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. You can if you want, though I will be writing a sequel where you'll see their children. I may not follow canon, meaning I may give them more children than JKR did and change the names. |
silent_heartbeat
Sunday 23rd March 2008 15:12 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
*pouts* pwetty pwease update soon!!! i'm begging shamelessly! lmao
i loved it!
S_H |
| Friday 28th March 2008 05:40 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Sorry, it will take some time to make the next one. I hope to be done by April Fool's Day. Thanks for the review. |
crazyredhead
Saturday 22nd March 2008 21:46 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| please please update i like this so much. cant wait to see what you do next. I hope harry fights draco update soon please |
| Sunday 23rd March 2008 02:16 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. Well, you make get your wish. |
the_critic
Saturday 22nd March 2008 17:27 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
hmmm. I've really like your work for a long time, but it seems to be dropping in quality. The main plotline seems to have dissapeered with over-dramatic relationships and semi-boring subplots. Also, your H/G relationship has turned altogether cheesy. I'm not trying to be mean, but I think perhaps, you can do better than this?
Critic. |
| Sunday 23rd March 2008 02:14 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review and critic. Actually, I like cheesy. The romance is part of the plot since the gist of the prophecy is that the seven remain together. Anyone who separates from the group permanently will endanger the chance of the Light to win. Sorry if it seems the quality has gone down. There'll be plenty of action later, especially in the summer. |
Harry_Ginny_Freak
Saturday 22nd March 2008 12:01 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| it waz a wonderful! i am happy you p;osted even if it waz a bit short!the part with rose and neville is SO typical Ron!You gave us a hint bout Luna too!I wonder if her and Colin will hook up??!!!come on can you give a faithful reader just a LITTLE hint! LOL! keep up the great work.i look forwaord to teh next chapter! |
| Sunday 23rd March 2008 02:06 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Actually, it's average length for this story. Luna/Colin? Maybe but you'll have to wait. Thanks for the review. |
nas4a2
Friday 21st March 2008 21:12 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| this i great chapter and i can't wait for the next one |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:19 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I hope to update by April Fool's Day. |
blue artemis
Friday 21st March 2008 20:10 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| I did like the part about Neville and Rose. And I liked the duels. And the strengthening of the bond. |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:17 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked all that. |
mynameisginny
Friday 21st March 2008 18:28 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| arrrgg! make them kiss already!!! |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:16 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. It'll come but can't tell you when. |
midnightwriter1213
Friday 21st March 2008 17:33 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Great work! Sorry for missing out on reviewing the last chap, I saw you had updated while was going through my e-mails when I was supposed to be doing homework, and I just tucked it away in a folder and forgot about reading the chap. But I'm back now! This was one of the best chapters yet, and I love the dueling. I think the way you captured Luna in her and Colin's duel was very impressive. As is the norm with your stories, she's very in character and is written almost the way JKR would write her. The Trio interaction was really good, and I love how you have Ginny fitting in and hanging out with them more than some other writers. I recently read a story on FictionAlley, and the writer wrote Ginny as very much out of the loop. I don't really think it was that way. I enjoy stories better if the point of view of the writer is similar to mine, and as you probably know from my glowing reviews, I enjoy this story a lot. Great Ginny/Harry scenes in this chap, and I love the blossoming Rose/Neville relationship. Although it probably has some semblance of purpose to the plot, I really wouldn't like to see Ti end up with Romilda. I never liked her. (I know I'm putting in bits from last chapter, but I missed that one, so I should make up for it, right?) Great job as usual, and keep posting fast!
~MidnightWriter |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:14 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your great review. You'll see a bit more of Luna in the story. The duel between her and Colin has a purpose that you'll find out about later. I always love writing Harry/Ginny moments. There will also be more Rose and Neville moments. Now, the Ti and Romilda thing is something purposely planned. Think of it as a cross between Ron/Lavender and Harry/Ginny in the first part of HBP. |
tragic
Friday 21st March 2008 17:25 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| Great chpater. I loved the deuls. As for the Rose and Nev scene how typical of Ron. |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:05 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. Yeah, it was typical or Ron. |
Mex
Friday 21st March 2008 14:44 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Great chapter!
A bit too romantic from time to time, but overall great as usual (: |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:04 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. Romance is a big part of my stories as much as action because I think it's lacking in the books and I love romance. |
Grandma Kate
Friday 21st March 2008 14:18 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| It was exciting and we know there is more to come. |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 08:00 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your review. Yes, there will be more. |
fire_faerie
Friday 21st March 2008 13:56 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHA! |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 07:59 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. Hope to hear from you again with a longer review. |
fire_faerie
Friday 21st March 2008 13:55 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Nice! I loved the part with Neville and Rose, so cute! Please update soon, because I really want to know more about this tournament thig. you have me hooked again!
Amazing chapter, by the way |
| Saturday 22nd March 2008 07:58 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. Yeah, that part was cute. The rest of the tournament will be coming, hopefully by April Fool's Day. |
