gymnastgal19
Friday 26th October 2007 11:03 | Leave-taking |
WOW!!! this was a really good story!
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dcgirl
Saturday 4th August 2007 11:25 | Leave-taking |
| I really enjoyed this story. You captured being a teenager well. |
Aqua Fountain*
Wednesday 25th April 2007 02:03 | Leave-taking |
That's sweet.
He'd swallowed his pride, nearly choking on it in the process, and come here to beg her one last time not to go. I like this line - the nearly choking part is funny.
I like how you made the first kiss not flawless - it makes the story more real. Did hermione use a Portkey to get to the airport?
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Bryher
Sunday 18th March 2007 14:32 | Leave-taking |
| Awww, that was lovely. Really liked your characterisation of Ron and Hermione. I loved the way Luna was singing Weasley is our king at that particular stage in the proceedings too... Thanks, Helen |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Sunday 23rd October 2005 09:16 | Leave-taking |
| awe,so sweet
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| Sunday 23rd October 2005 11:27 | Leave-taking (Author Response) |
| Thank you!
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jeanne
Thursday 14th July 2005 11:37 | Leave-taking |
| One of the best R/H ficlets I,ve read in a long time. I,m not a R/H.fan per se,but this was good.Poor bumbling Ron.Hand in the wrong place at the wrong time,but it was cute.Nice work. |
Honeydukeschocolate
Friday 15th April 2005 22:00 | Leave-taking |
| awwwwwwwwww *cries* |
Thorfinna
Friday 5th November 2004 18:30 | Leave-taking |
Ok I've now read all your stories (I hope, if you've any hanging out anywhere else, let me know!)
You're an excellent writer. I hope you continue to write in this universe. I agree with what someone else said as well, I'd love to see other stories of the Potter's 8 kids.
Tracy |
catfood
Monday 1st November 2004 22:21 | Leave-taking |
| This is quite beautiful! Very well done, and you didn't take the
easy way out by having Hermione decide to stay. I'd love to see a
continuation of this: perhaps a story of her return?
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| Monday 1st November 2004 22:21 | Leave-taking (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Hermione will return, though I won't be addressing that in another one-shot--Ron will have to wait until I get around to writing the last chapter of "Seo Gerecednis." Thanks for writing! |
