silent_heartbeat
Tuesday 10th March 2009 11:12 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
awesome. i love it. except for the vision. that was bad. hopefully they can prevent it.
S_H |
silent_heartbeat
Tuesday 10th March 2009 10:48 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| ok. |
nightwing
Wednesday 24th September 2008 22:14 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| I hope the plan of riddle fails they stop them this time |
Talin
Monday 7th July 2008 21:54 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
I just finished both stories and I have to say I love it
but I was wondering why they never go over to Sirius's for some fun and why are the couples always wanting to be like Harry and Ginny also when is Ti going to stop being a little baby about this and fulling forgive them and realize that Draco is using him |
QuidditchLover
Wednesday 2nd July 2008 22:01 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
so i started reading these a long time ago and went back to re-read them. they are still amazing, of course. no pressure or anything, but it would be great if you could write faster!!
emilygail0323@aol.com |
crazyredhead
Sunday 29th June 2008 21:14 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| please update soon this is really good |
| Wednesday 2nd July 2008 17:24 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. I hope to update by Monday or Tuesday next week, if not sooner. |
varad999
Thursday 26th June 2008 07:39 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| Good chapter da....................I liked the wandless magic thing. It was good and i also liked the chemistry between Nev and Rose that u depicted. And i hope that u write the next chapter ASAP!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Wednesday 2nd July 2008 17:20 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it. I'm busy writing the next one. I had little time last week since my mom was in the hospital and I had to be with her. She's fine now and I'm about halfway done with the next chapter. I hope to have it with my beta by the end of the week. Thanks for the review. |
The_Critic
Wednesday 25th June 2008 18:18 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Where the hell am I? Is this another vision?
People Don't often use swear words instinctively in their thoughts. Try cutting the swearing in their thoughts next time. It would make it flow better to cut the 'hell' and have her thoughts be:
'Where am I? Is this a vision?'
Harry should also be more aware of his age and his lack of experience when he's so eager to go fight. Overall, pretty good chapter.
Critic |
| Thursday 26th June 2008 06:52 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review and constructive criticism. I tend to do that so I thought it would be okay for Rose to do that due to her surprise. Harry just wants to help and is a bit overconfident because of his relative success in the two battles he's fought. |
mischiefmanaged
Wednesday 25th June 2008 08:30 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
Great chapter!
I'm so glad Rose and Neville are together! |
| Thursday 26th June 2008 06:49 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Yeah, so are many other people. I'm glad many of my readers like this ship in my version of HP. Thanks for the review. |
jere
Tuesday 24th June 2008 23:29 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| hey. nice chapter overall, just a slight typo near the end after Rose woke up and Harry finished talking to albus "sorry for loosing my temper" i think its supposed to be losing |
| Wednesday 25th June 2008 07:49 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review and correction. You're right, it was a typo. |
Harry_Ginny_Freak
Tuesday 24th June 2008 19:30 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six |
| it was great.itwas hard to read about the rape and the ripping apart of the young boy but i understand why you had it and it really shows that your a great writer because you can really make me FEEL the story!!!!!ttyl!!!-A. Scmidt |
| Wednesday 25th June 2008 07:48 | Harry Potter and the Prophesied Six (Author Response) |
| Yeah, it was hard to write too. Thanks for the review. |
