poppins
Thursday 23rd February 2012 19:09 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
AWWW! You know, I never actually thought of Remus and Tonks' wedding, but it fits well in the time line of the story. This was so sweet and in-character of both of them with Remus' old-fashioned-ness (what a gentleman) and Tonks being the rebel she is!
I also liked the little hints at the relationship between Harry and Remus. I never really thought of them as close seeing as Sirius was the godfather but it works well in here.
Also, the comment about them being old and grey made me sad....
All in all, reat story |
ursulabear
Sunday 16th October 2011 10:31 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| I really enjoyed your "fluff", it made me smile. Just enough cheek was added to make the overwhelming sweetness a bit tart. Thank you for expanding my vocabulary (I am not an English native) with words like resplendent, lurid, sequester. |
| Sunday 16th October 2011 12:45 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| Thank you! This was one of my very first stories, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. |
turtlegirl
Friday 25th September 2009 06:14 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| Once again your interpretation of this sequence is perfect! Thank you for this. |
| Monday 28th September 2009 07:29 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reviewing! |
GinevraMollyWeasley
Monday 19th January 2009 16:18 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| oh, that was .......... ahhhhhh! i can't find a word for it!!!!!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!!! |
| Monday 19th January 2009 16:22 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
I hope it's a nice word, lol!
Thank you for reviewing. |
Hollu
Monday 27th October 2008 19:38 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| Beautiful. You've made me cry again. |
| Tuesday 28th October 2008 11:21 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| I love to hear that I've made people cry! Thank you for taking the time to review. |
the_critic
Friday 15th August 2008 10:52 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
Very Sweet.
Critic. |
| Friday 15th August 2008 12:05 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
lindaleeann
Monday 11th August 2008 10:22 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| I love your story. You have me in tears. |
| Tuesday 12th August 2008 09:43 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I know I probably sound mean, but I love hearing that I've made people cry. |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 9th August 2008 20:37 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
nice story i wisht hat harry was there... they could have disguised him or something...
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| Sunday 10th August 2008 04:03 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
| Glad you liked it! I would have liked to have Harry there too, but I was trying to write the story in keeping with canon events, so he had to stay on Privet Drive. |
aharkins
Wednesday 6th August 2008 07:13 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
| This is a wonderful story. I always enjoy seeing Remus happy, and your Tonks is just exactly right . I was surprised to learn that Molly and Arthur had Bill and Charlie before they got married. |
| Wednesday 6th August 2008 09:22 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
Thanks! I was happy with how Tonks came out.
Molly and Arthur didn't have Charlie before they married - I accidentally sent Aggiebell the pre-beta'd version of the story in which I was having JKR-style maths issues! And I just spotted the fact that this has Harry living in Sussex rather than Surrey. D'oh! |
majolie
Tuesday 5th August 2008 19:43 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle |
So sweet. I love a missing moment being filled in. Being a rabid HG fan, I also enjoyed the moments focused on Ginny's current post-breakup state and on Remus learning about the relationship she and Harry had recently ended.
One little thing - shouldn't Molly and Arthur be married a lot longer than 20 years at this point? |
| Wednesday 6th August 2008 09:19 | The Missing Piece of the Puzzle (Author Response) |
Oooops - you know what happened here? I sent the pre-beta'd version to Aggiebell! It's supposed to be thirty. Good catch, though!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for letting me know! |
