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I love Moey and Harry's first encounter. Its obvious she wasn't doing her best when she was caught but I like that she did take him seriously. And that he reacted so seriously.
Harry didn't answer, but he did bring his wand down again so that it was pointed at Moey's spine. As Harry reached out towards the hem of Moey's shirt, she began to slowly sway her hips.
"Stop that!" Harry commanded.
"Yes, sir," Moey replied. "I love it when a man takes charge."
You just LOVE teasing Harry! A bit of a running gag perhaps?
"Don't even think about it, woman."
Sorry can't see Harry being this way to someone he just captured, maybe Hermione. ;)
Gringotts ATM - I like this little bit, makes sense.
I'll have six qualified Aurors who can be part of your detail.
But all we meet is Laurel and Moey right? What happened to the others?
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