"Dunno, M'am, I haven't used one in five years." Harry answered. Why didn't he use a ballpoint? It would certainly avoid the messes he couldn't clean without magic. He made a note to himself to look into that once he was in town again.

I love the little things you keep sticking in unexpectedly. I also liked the way Harry got back at Dudley with the shirnking charm threat. And how he felt somehow soild after thier discussion.

I like the dream sequence too.