moralitas
Saturday 15th August 2009 23:06 | A Good Night |
| a missing moment? very well written, although, i wouldn't of expected harry to be so open about the relationship. |
| Monday 17th August 2009 07:59 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| That's one of the reasons I chose the moment I did . . . I think that at the end of that day, when he's still blindingly happy and not really thinking straight, he might be willing to talk that openly. On any other day, I'm sure he wouldn't. Thanks for reading. |
majolie
Wednesday 11th February 2009 20:18 | A Good Night |
| yay - what a lovely bit of happy fluff to read after several weeks of stress and sadness - thank you! I had to re-read several paragraphs throughout the story because they were so good I needed to savor them again before I could move on. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 11th February 2009 18:45 | A Good Night |
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Felix Felicis
Saturday 7th February 2009 19:31 | A Good Night |
I re-read this story again and realized I didn't review the first time! Sorry!
If one wasn't paying attention, it would appear that this story was just a missing moment about Harry and Ginny. I feel that it's something else entirely. It's more about the maturity and deep friendship that Harry shares with Hermione. You did such a good job capturing their shared trust and understanding. They both seemed so free in their conversation, which is so believable at this point. It's been so many years now that meaningful moments like this must have occured more often, though JKR didn't really show them to us. You captured it very well. Thank you so much for sharing with us! |
arielgenevieve
Thursday 5th February 2009 22:32 | A Good Night |
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gbtso
Thursday 5th February 2009 10:44 | A Good Night |
This was so... I don't want to call it sweet. But it is. It's very indicative of Harry and Hermione's friendship. It's something I truly believe could have happened after Harry watched Ginny up the stairs.
I like happy Harry. Unfortunately, I always end up writing him miserable. Go figure!
Great job, Dave! |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:35 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
Sweet is okay. I was kinda going for sweet, but in a special way. I especially wanted to show the strength and depth of Harry and Hermione's friendship, so I'm glad you saw that.
Miserable Harry has a place, don't worry. I just found a moment where he was already happy and borrowed it for my own purposes.
Thanks for reading! |
Melindaleo
Tuesday 3rd February 2009 13:50 | A Good Night |
| Awww! This is such a feel-good missing moment. It made my eyesight all blurry - in a good way! I love the comraderie and friendship between Harry and Hermione here. It was nice to see how much both of them have grown. Nicely done. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:34 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I wanted to show Harry and Hermione's friendship, particularly in contrast with Harry's relationship with Ginny at this point (or any point, really). And, as a plus, showing that friendship at this particular moment meant that they could be happy, and Harry would be about as open as he will ever get. |
RIPHedwig
Monday 2nd February 2009 03:36 | A Good Night |
so cute, i love harry and hermione's little chats! reminds me of goblet of fire, when they'd go for their long walks around the lake
B |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:32 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| You know, I hadn't thought of that, but I like it. It's the same sort of expression of their friendship. Thanks for reading! |
Wolfric
Sunday 1st February 2009 00:58 | A Good Night |
| Good story. Thanks for writing. W. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:31 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading. |
heratulipsia
Saturday 31st January 2009 20:33 | A Good Night |
| I like it! short and cute! And I completely believe the characters. Nice job! |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:31 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I really wanted the characters to be believable. |
harry_ginnyfan
Thursday 29th January 2009 21:18 | A Good Night |
| cute |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:31 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks. |
aharkins
Thursday 29th January 2009 20:38 | A Good Night |
Your stories always make me smile. Thank you for sharing.
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| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:30 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks for reading. |
weaselsu
Thursday 29th January 2009 17:21 | A Good Night |
| I loved this because I just love Harry and Hermione's friendship! Everyone knowing but Harry was great and so true for a lot of people. Good job! |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:30 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. I really enjoy their friendship, too, which is really what got me started on this idea. |
the_critic
Thursday 29th January 2009 16:50 | A Good Night |
Awww.
Great missing moment! 10/10.
Perfect character interaction, very cute!
Critic |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 14:04 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much! |
hagridsheart
Thursday 29th January 2009 16:48 | A Good Night |
Outstanding fic. I feel all warm and goey inside. Bravo.
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| Thursday 5th February 2009 13:36 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. |
enchantedgurls
Thursday 29th January 2009 14:42 | A Good Night |
| Many people have written the 'what happens after the common room scene' scenario, but I haven't read a scene that tackles what happened when the night that HG shared their first kiss ended. I loved this! Harry and Ginny were so adorable together and Harry's chat with Hermione was also very nice. Good work! |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 13:35 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| That's pretty much where my thought started. I realised that the day would have to end at some point, and it wouldn't necessarily be a trivial moment for Harry. So I combined that with some thoughts about Harry's relationship with Hermione, and voila! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Dad
Thursday 29th January 2009 14:09 | A Good Night |
| So well written, but still a bit of fluff! You normally write much more extensive stuff. Get pounding the keys. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 13:33 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Don't worry, I am. This was just a very short diversion. |
zeta_one
Thursday 29th January 2009 07:25 | A Good Night |
| Very cute and fluffy story. I enjoyed the interact between Harry and Hermione. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 12:49 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. |
Ocean Dream
Thursday 29th January 2009 07:04 | A Good Night |
| So sweet! |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 10:36 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
mary-v
Thursday 29th January 2009 05:48 | A Good Night |
This was... amazing!
I honestly went into one of those crazy-fangirls-full-body-flail things. And I haven't done something like that in an incredibly long time! Thanks so much for sharing this little gem!!!
~Maria |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 10:26 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Ha! I'm glad you liked this story. I'm not quite that excited about it, but I'm very fond of it. Thanks! |
hp4-sauce
Wednesday 28th January 2009 20:46 | A Good Night |
| Very, very cute. Super Harry/Hermione chat. Very much in character, both. Great job. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 10:26 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. I really wanted them to be in character as great friends. |
ngayonatkailanman
Wednesday 28th January 2009 19:52 | A Good Night |
| A feel good read. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 10:25 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
| Thanks very much. |
girlspell
Wednesday 28th January 2009 19:20 | A Good Night |
I loved this little story. You're so good in portraying the warmth and tenderness between Harry. Ginny and his friends. I also liked the way his relationship with Ginny was brought out.
I don't know why, but I just love this line
She grinned at him in a way that was beautiful and full of Ginny
Great line. |
| Thursday 5th February 2009 10:07 | A Good Night (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to highlight the relationship between Harry and Hermione, and at the same time I wanted to contrast that with the relationship between Harry and Ginny.
That line is fun. It's incredibly sappy, but at that particular moment in the story, Harry's feeling just giddy enough to think something that saccharine. I may never get to write a line like that again. |
