Prongs739
Saturday 30th August 2008 14:06 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| That was very sweet. |
mynameisginny
Monday 12th May 2008 15:43 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| ginerva |
gymnastgal19
Monday 17th March 2008 12:50 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
awww!!!! This was a really cute story
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 7th November 2007 17:51 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
nice story! quite the way to get together :p getting stranded...
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Felix Felicis
Saturday 16th September 2006 15:43 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
Great little plot for a one-shot! I loved the tenderness and the vulerability that you tucked neatly in here and there. Ginny and Harry both seemed very much in character, too. This is just fun to imagine - the two of them trapped in a cave, holding each other to keep warm... and then finally admitting their love for each other. It seemed a bit sudden for Harry but that's okay because we all know he loves her.
It would have been fun to see how Ron and Hermione reacted once they knew the whole story, but I'm glad you didn't write that. In many ways it's better just to leave things to the imagination.
A well-written bit of fluff. Good work. |
Novera
Thursday 29th June 2006 16:08 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| romintic i love it |
Novera
Tuesday 6th June 2006 21:51 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| wow, this is swweeetttt. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 31st May 2006 16:53 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| You know what, I think Harry planed them being "lost." but if not, or still, it was a very good story. |
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 17th April 2006 14:12 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
Aww sooooo cute. Some of it seemed too easily said but it was awesome either way. I wish you would continue this if at all possible but probably not . I loved:
As they were leaving the cave, they heard Professor McGonagall's distinctive voice ring out, "What do you mean, you found them sleeping together?"
Lol McGonagall needs a bigger part in all the stories. She has the potential as a character to be funny in a strict teachery sort of way. (if that even made sense lol).
Am reading more of your stories right now so you'll be getting several reviews today!
Kortnee |
lilyp
Saturday 4th June 2005 18:06 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| It's a good story. But I laughed a lot with the sentence " my name is
Virginia, not Guinevere". It's exactly the opposite with
Rowling's ginny , since Ginevra is sort of Guinevere in Italian.
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lilyp
Saturday 4th June 2005 16:17 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| It's a good story. But I laughed a lot with the sentence " my name is
Virginia, not Guinevere". It's exactly the opposite with
Rowling's ginny , since Ginevra is sort of Guinevere in Italian.
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levotatingT
Tuesday 26th April 2005 16:16 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
OMG. I can't find any words to describe it. It was so romantic and beautiful, I know it's a little soap opera remark but it was really cool. I liked the way Ron and Hermione walked in on them. but the way Harry Expresed his feeling were definitly not him, but thats oK, it was still good.
Keep writing, and Plez write me back
levotatingT |
critmo
Sunday 26th December 2004 08:19 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| Sorry to say that G's full name IS Ginevra...
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| Sunday 26th December 2004 10:16 | Opportunities of Circumstance (Author Response) |
| As wonderful as it would be for every author to go back an 'correct'
every one of their stories when new bits of information comes out from
JK...it's simpl not possible and I for one will not spend my time
'canonizing' any of my stories. This particular one was written
several months before JK released that bit of information. I know
her name is Ginevra, as 99% of the people who post stories on this
site. Thank you for your concern for my knowledge of canon facts,
but I'm afraid that you're pumping a dry well here.
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Allie Kiwi
Thursday 16th December 2004 16:35 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
Lovely story, Michael. I really liked the humour within it, such as Ron and McGonagall having a fit over Harry and Ginny 'sleeping together'.
Favourite line has to be this, though:
They were funny creatures, to be sure—one of the only natural enemies of garden gnomes, if you didn't count her mother, and they had the vernacular of a sailor.
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| Thursday 16th December 2004 18:43 | Opportunities of Circumstance (Author Response) |
| Another one who found my silliest story. Did you choke on a fluff ball? It was quite fluffy.
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Eressea
Monday 13th December 2004 05:11 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
| I like how Ginny doesn't already know that Harry likes her. It makes it more realistic. |
| Thursday 16th December 2004 18:42 | Opportunities of Circumstance (Author Response) |
| Thanks! It wasn't my best effort, but it was fun to write.
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DADAGinny
Friday 10th December 2004 16:52 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
Lovely! Fluffy! You're right -- I do have to go and brush my teeth now! Loved Ron's reaction!!!
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| Thursday 16th December 2004 18:42 | Opportunities of Circumstance (Author Response) |
I had hoped that this story would get buried and never read again, as
I've mostly overcome the premature intimacy problem that this story
incorporates. On top of that, it wasn't even all that original -
Arabella's story was much better than mine.
Thanks for reading anyway.
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pixiellie
Monday 11th October 2004 11:49 | Opportunities of Circumstance |
This story was exactly what I needed after a long few days working and
studying! You promised sweetness and fluff and more than
delivered. I
loved the way you describe Ginny's thoughts on love, and giving up
control. As a smart strong character who had gone through
something so young that would make her feel powerless, falling in love
would be scary in more ways than one. Yet, at the same time, she
instintively trusts Harry to guide her through. A nice contrast.
Wonderful job of capturing that first excitement of being kissed (if
only on the cheek!) by the person you love. I believe your
version of Ginny, her thoughts and her feelings.
Ginny's confession of her feelings was wonderful. She would have
to be the one to speak up, as I picture Harry too unused to his
feelings. You gave me one of those wonderful girly-sigh moments
when he tells her of his love. ("awwh!")
Ron finding them was very cute as well. A sweet fun read that
went far in cheering me up. Nice job, and thank you for posting.
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| Monday 11th October 2004 11:49 | Opportunities of Circumstance (Author Response) |
| You had to read my second worst story, first, didn't you?
I really appreciate your kind words. This was my first 'serious'
attempt at fluff and I didn't do that bad, but I've certainly done
better since! I look forward to many more reviews from you.
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