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kopfsalat2000
Thursday 6th October 2011 10:41 | The Shadows Of Silence | | Interesting start to the story. I'll definitely continue reading! | | Friday 7th October 2011 07:40 | The Shadows Of Silence (Author Response) | Thank you, and I hope that you enjoy the rest of it!
Myth xxx | gymnastgal19
Friday 21st March 2008 15:41 | The Shadows Of Silence | huh... thats interesitng... i wonder what wormtail was doing adn what that rose is....'
| GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 16:33 | The Shadows Of Silence | At least he's a healthy size -- I guess we have different definitions of what a healthy size is, Aunt Petunia
no one else he knew shared his initial -- you forgot Hagrid, Hannah (Abbott)
So Wormtail is haunting Privet Drive, but I though Voldemort couldn't access the place because of the blood protection. And what is the significance of the black lily? And where are the watchers -- not much good if the don't notice Pettigrew leaving the flower in plain sight
| Dragen
Friday 31st March 2006 08:34 | The Shadows Of Silence | A few things I like to say, the first is with the spelling... I'm not good at it, but I know not to make mistakes with th and s like you do. For exmpal, (see my spelling is bad too) with Thothe and thtupid, they meant to be Those and stupid.
But for that, it was a good start to the story, and I hope you keep up with the good work.
So what is it with Peter Pettigrew, why was he there for?? And what is it about the black lily??
Your's Dragen. | | Friday 31st March 2006 08:37 | The Shadows Of Silence (Author Response) | Hi Dragon,
Those spelling mistakes are intentional to show Tonks' lisp. She's posing as a five year old girl, who, in this case, has a lisp.As a result all her "s's" of at least some of them, will come out as a "th" sound.
Myth | Rocky235
Sunday 12th February 2006 15:15 | The Shadows Of Silence | Bummer!
I just went to fanfiction to get my old review for chapter 1. I figured I could cut and paste my way in to extra points. I almost have enough for a toaster.
Now that I'm thinking about it, I'll bet there were lots of reviews even more eloquent than mine. Certainly with more words.
That's one good thing about having CRS. I get to read the really great stories more than once. I know I'm going to enjoy this. | dakkon13
Wednesday 12th January 2005 16:27 | The Shadows Of Silence | | Okay. I'm intrigued.
| Ashtur an'Vangan
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