davyt_0247
Tuesday 19th January 2010 19:17 | Love and Pain |
| Very Nice!!! Don't seel yourself short girl you did a great job!!! keep writing, you have real talent. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 10:29 | Love and Pain |
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QuidditchLover
Sunday 9th September 2007 21:04 | Love and Pain |
| in no way does this suck! im totally crying right now like a complete loser because this was so moving. ahh. its fitting that arthur wouldve died for the happiness of the world. now my tears are turning to sniffles. ill be looking for other stories by you!emilygail0323@aol.com |
No Idea Why I Smile
Monday 20th November 2006 21:15 | Love and Pain |
girl, dont put yourself down..that was really good...and yeah...if it had been Neville, i probably wouldnt be very happy, even though im really sad that it was Arthur.....
but yeah...i look forward to reading more of your stuff...it was good...i promise...
NIWIS + |
eaglesnest
Saturday 30th September 2006 21:52 | Love and Pain |
| I liked your first fanfic. It was well written and brought out Ginny's heartache and Harry's ability to bring her back to reality. harry was a real support for Ginny. I hope to see many more of your writings. Well done. |
Jenn_Lynn
Wednesday 27th September 2006 19:53 | Love and Pain |
Hi there - congratulations on your first fic. I just wanted to write you a note to say your story was really good. You conveyed a lot of emotions in the words that you chose - it had me hooked. I can't wait to read more of your work!
~Jenn |
platypus621
Wednesday 27th September 2006 18:05 | Love and Pain |
| it's cute. it doesn't suck at all. i like it. |
vilhelm123
Wednesday 27th September 2006 16:13 | Love and Pain |
oh my god!
how can you think this fic sux's?
Its fantastic! i really thought it was harry who was dead at first and i was really amazed that it was mr weasley but it was still a loverly story and it really pulled my heart strings
keep it up!
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Hajra
Tuesday 26th September 2006 14:31 | Love and Pain |
| A lovely piece...I love the inscription on the gravestone x |
redonthefly
Monday 25th September 2006 16:26 | Love and Pain |
| Woah...don't beat yourself up like that! Every writer has to start somewhere, and this really is a fine piece -- very poignant. Do keep writing -- you get better every time. And please believe me and all the other people who comment here...it really is a lovely bit of work. |
Grandma Kate
Monday 25th September 2006 10:52 | Love and Pain |
| I have to echo your reviewers who commented on how good this was for a first fic. Please continue to write. |
Novera
Saturday 15th July 2006 20:11 | Love and Pain |
| SAD AND SWEET |
VirginiaGinny
Monday 6th February 2006 15:04 | Love and Pain |
-blinkblink- This is your.. your first fanfic? wow. My first fanfic was horible, and yours is nothing short of fantastic. All of Ginny's emotion made me want to cry also!
Great job! Apparently you payed attention in English. |
jeanne
Thursday 21st July 2005 10:06 | Love and Pain |
| For a first fic, it was very good.Very insightful,and worked better as mourning her father. Well done.Also, Harry would be able to sympathize more with her re.her dad,than Neville,even though Nev. was their friend. |
weasleysrcool
Monday 3rd January 2005 12:53 | Love and Pain |
| It was a poignant, wonderful little fic. I enjoyed it immensly, keep writing, you have talent. |
jabarber69
Sunday 21st November 2004 23:17 | Love and Pain |
| I think you did a very good job. really written well, you have a gift for writing. even though the story was sad over the death of Arthur it was still very good, you have a good imagination. |
XiaoXiao
Friday 29th October 2004 06:40 | Love and Pain |
| Very nice. Yeah, it's a bit sweet, but I like it that way! Thanks for sharing. |
