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Friday 22nd July 2011 08:23 | Innocence Lost And Found | Interesting start, seems promising, I look forward to reading more.
Thank you. | Spark Soliton
Sunday 26th July 2009 08:25 | Innocence Lost And Found | | I have only just stumbled upon this story and with the publication of the subsequent books this is now rather AU but I still find this chapter refreshing - it's nice to read a story in which the focus is on moony and padfoot whilst still telling the tale about harry potter. Good and funny dialogue and the story certainly looks interesting! | Praeceps09
Friday 17th July 2009 16:41 | Innocence Lost And Found | | Date is wrong at start of Chapter. 2001 would put Harry as 21. The year you should be using is 1994-95. Otherwise good start |
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