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Sunday 4th April 2010 13:37 | The Owl | | I was very good, my only problem was how you used words like ne'er and lass. Of course there's nothing wrong with those words, I just have an irrational prejudice against shakespearian words. Either way, it was a good piece |
Wednesday 5th December 2007 21:42 | The Owl | Well done! You almost get it right, but the rhythm doesn't quite ring true. But an excellent job just the same. The rhyme is quite good and the development is strong and sure through the progress of the poem.
A well crafted and enjoyable poem, loved it. | Pugpal
Sunday 28th August 2005 00:03 | The Owl | | I love it! But I kept waiting for Hedwig to say "never more" lol. Anywho, this poem brightened my day! You are awesome! | SillyGillie
Sunday 21st August 2005 23:27 | The Owl | | I re-read it! Such a fantastic job! It must've taken you ages to write! Finding the correct words! Genius! | SillyGillie
Sunday 21st August 2005 22:01 | The Owl | | Hilarious! Awesome job! | Trystym
Tuesday 19th July 2005 20:44 | The Owl | " At last year's end she did declare her pairing with another. Blast!"
A fitting rhyme, and a perfect sentiment. Bravo!
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Saturday 2nd July 2005 18:43 | The Owl | | How cute! I enjoyed the "Raven"ish rhyme scheme. It must have taken a bit of effort to fully pull that off. I love the twist on it with the owl and all. It is really giving me an urge to read some Poe. Well done. | Kelleypen
Saturday 25th June 2005 09:17 | The Owl | | Brilliant shippiness and brilliant parody of the Raven. Edgar Allan would be pleased too. | Arnel
Sunday 19th June 2005 00:09 | The Owl | I love this version of "The Raven" You've done an admirable job of staying true to the original meter and creating a mood of tension. I'd love to see what Ginny's Poe-like reaction to finding Hedwig at her window would be.
My favorite line in this poem is "At last year's end she did declare her pairing with another. Blast!" and found myself chuckling merrily at this sentiment. Great fun, that!
Please post again soon. A.
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Friday 17th June 2005 18:29 | The Owl | I like it |
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