charpurcell2
Monday 18th March 2013 12:58 | First Date |
| sooo good. are you doing more? |
Dad
Wednesday 11th February 2009 09:37 | First Date |
| Very well written, but not exactly original. Still a nice bite sized read. |
Sheepie_101
Saturday 3rd January 2009 17:30 | First Date |
+ = LUV
Pure G/H fluff - and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! well done, u r gr8 at writing
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gymnastgal19
Monday 21st January 2008 17:19 | First Date |
hehe cute story
loved the ending :p
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harry fanatic
Monday 1st January 2007 16:18 | First Date |
| It was enjoyable. I love romantic stories, and I loved this one. keep on writing. |
hp4-sauce
Monday 6th February 2006 17:35 | First Date |
| Very, very enjoyable. No matter how many times this missing moment has been done, if it has been done well, like this one, it's a joy to read. |
realm flower
Tuesday 31st January 2006 15:16 | First Date |
| i read this one alot.....AND IT JUST GETS BETTER. |
Delfino
Wednesday 17th August 2005 08:13 | First Date |
This was great!! I loved Ginny's parting comment. Wonderful job, I had a great time reading this! |
Mrs.HarryPotter12
Tuesday 16th August 2005 22:34 | First Date |
I think you wrote the Harry Ginny stuff better than JKR in the 6th book. lol
-lain |
Sweetblood123
Tuesday 16th August 2005 11:44 | First Date |
| This is soo cute! I LOVE & stories! ((It looks kinda like James and Lily, but i like that pariing too! lol. I guess Potter men have a thing for redhead women! lol)) |
critmo
Tuesday 16th August 2005 01:38 | First Date |
| Sweet, very nice, but would they really be that comfortable with each other so soon? - I can't really say I'd write it differently, but you got me thinking. |
amamama
Tuesday 16th August 2005 00:39 | First Date |
Experienced!Ginny and Inexperienced!Harry, and oh, so much in
love. Wonderful. This is definitely a possible recount of
what happened after their first kiss. Lovely written. I
liked the way Ginny had noticed Harry's jealousy, how she'd been
watching and hoping that he really liked her. And his naming her the Ginny Weasley.
Really nice ficlet, are you going to do more, more missing H/G moments? I sure wouldn't mind.
Oh, and there's one small nit hiding in there, about two pages up, when they enter the tower: Instinctively, Harry put her arms around her waist... he put his
arms around her waist, didn't he? I sort of doubt he removed
Ginny's arms from around his neck and placed them around her own
waist. Not really romantic...
Thanks for sharing!
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Wild Magelet
Tuesday 16th August 2005 00:32 | First Date |
*Sigh* *Is wallowing in lovely H/G-ness* Beautifully written story: it made me want to hug Harry, Ginny and you for writing it all at the same time! I especially liked:
“I’m going out with Harry Potter,” she said softly.
“And I’m going out with Ginny Weasley,” Harry retorted. “The Ginny Weasley.” |
HisGirl
Monday 15th August 2005 23:56 | First Date |
| Too cute!!!! I loved how you made Harry so innocent in the romance department. It makes me love him even more. I high five you for your H/G goodness! |
